Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 = KO

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 03-27-05 at 06:28 PM

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Evolution has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-26-05 06:31 PM.

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My Lines Are ILL yo

Tstorm has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-27-05 05:20 AM.

Theres no chance of this guy ever learning how to write..
educations lacking..but this guy cnt even tell black from white
Ya skills are lacking, and as a rap artist you a fake..
havin ya lines in the gutter..is the only time ull see "Grate"
crunchin numbers is the only time this guy seen a "nine"
He Rhymes like a "period"..coz he never comes on time
called evolution coz hell never reach what he needs to be..
if you feel the need for talent....then "Evolve" into me!

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Voted For: Tstorm

This battle was one sided tstorm took it cuz he actually had punches and personals evolution was just rambling on and your closer failed to do anything as where in the contrast Tstorm's closer sealed the deal and Knocked you out best line in the battle


called evolution coz hell never reach what he needs to be
^^^^^good personal right there^^^^^^^

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Voted For: Tstorm

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Tstorm
Theres no chance of this guy ever learning how to write..
educations lacking..but this guy cnt even tell black from white
......Nice Opener.......
Ya skills are lacking, and as a rap artist you a fake..
havin ya lines in the gutter..is the only time ull see "Grate"
..:: Nice ::..
crunchin numbers is the only time this guy seen a "nine"
He Rhymes like a "period"..coz he never comes on time
...::: Nuttin specail Couldve said somethin hotta LOL :::...
called evolution coz hell never reach what he needs to be..
if you feel the need for talent....then "Evolve" into me!
...::: Nice Closer :::...

...::: Overall :::...
You Did fairly Um all ya bars Had soem good contact except that one where you said somethin bout crunchin numbers?.....wasnt feelin that too much but overall you take this battle and you did good

Evolution
Look kid, don’t mean to hurt you, but you suck & quit rapping, too
Because once you drop your verse, RV will be laughing at you
..:: Nope, Lets Try agian ::..
Your known for being wack, since all you do is do shit-talking
Couldn’t know what a punchline is, even if it hit your noggin
..:: Not tryin to Hate but That Line .,.....Played ... Sorry ::..
I stay looking at your other verses, and the shits starting to fade
But I can already predict that your whole shit is gonna be played
..:: MAke a punch outta ya disses Mayne Itll Help You out Alot much more ::..
This bitch is not on my level, cuz I’m just speaking the truth
Said he came can make the crowd cheer...
...............................................yea making them cheer boo’s
..:: Nope ::..

..:: Overall ::..
I wasnt feelin ya verse to much you didnt have ANY punchez you jus made some disses and they didnt really have a good impact i think that you should atleast try to mix ya verse with metaphors and stuff bcuz that is what is lacked outta ya verse

My Vote - ..:: Tstorm ::..


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Linx in my sig Thanx

Voted For: Evolution

tstorm
well your stucutre was pretty good, yoru flow was pretty decent, but your personals you didnt have much. your wordplay (finishing lines) they just were not hitting at all. the punches overal just were weak, i wasnt feelign your drop at all yo. 1

Ev
uh nice stucutre mayn. good flow and a decent syllable count. but really i liked was the punchlines the finishing lines were good some nice wordplay. this was one sided by far. keep doing ya thing. hope to see some of ya battles in the future. peace

RTF is ya have enough psots. linsk in the sig

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Voted For: Tstorm

evolution


Look kid, don’t mean to hurt you, but you suck & quit rapping, too
Because once you drop your verse, RV will be laughing at you
Your known for being wack, since all you do is do shit-talking
Couldn’t know what a punchline is, even if it hit your noggin
I stay looking at your other verses, and the shits starting to fade
But I can already predict that your whole shit is gonna be played
This bitch is not on my level, cuz I’m just speaking the truth
Said he came can make the crowd cheer...
...............................................yea making them cheer boo’s

not dat good of a verse
use more punches
enhance ur vocab
betta structure
6.5/10

t storm
Theres no chance of this guy ever learning how to write..
educations lacking..but this guy cnt even tell black from white
Ya skills are lacking, and as a rap artist you a fake..
havin ya lines in the gutter..is the only time ull see "Grate"
crunchin numbers is the only time this guy seen a "nine"
He Rhymes like a "period"..coz he never comes on time
called evolution coz hell never reach what he needs to be..
if you feel the need for talent....then "Evolve" into me!

liked sum of ur punches not 2 many punches doe
elevate sum more
work on vocab as well
overall better verse den evolution-no hate evolution
tstorm-7.5/10

my v/ tstorm

ay yall check out my hot battle vs. The kid 523
elaborate da battle and holla back wit a vote 4 da betta battler please

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