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Old 10-13-03, 11:05 PM   #1
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poetry ive done

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sitten in a corner i weep/
watch as my homies get killed in da street//
i look at my family and i know how lucky i am to be standin on these feet/
these emotions that i feel are confusing knowing wat ibeen through my sadness runs deep//
runned away twice only to return to a beatin that would leave me scarred/
living throught wat i have noone would know the pain of a fist that hit so hard//
abused by the people i trusted only to hear the i am so sorry over and over/
but they thought they was doing the right thing, after all would you back talk a drunk father//
being as old as i was a had nothin to do, though i was destined to be forever in doom/
he would never have thought where i was for i was allways hidin under my blanket in my room//
seeing the tears he knew they meant weekness, tryin to scramble wat ever bravery i had left/
he grabbed my throat and started to choke me to death//
my mother was scared she diddnt know wat to do/
but wat she did i thank her for that to//
she jumped on him to save my life she told me to run but i couldnt i had to help/
but i was to terrified by him so i hid underneith my blanket in stealth//
dreaming of a place of peace and quite/
then i heard da door burst down by a riot//
relizin that i was finally safe/
i came out from hidin i ran to the arms of whoever it was and they took me away to a brand new place//
went through many problems as a kid a youning tryin to make sumthan outa my life/
as i go to the place where they laid her to rest for her to begin a new life//
every year same day i go back and i say "thank you mom" for saving me/
and i remember that she is lookin down on me always but i always shed a tear//



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love i needed when u wasnt around
but those calls u gave me kept me standin my ground//
i know we had sum problems in the past
this time ima make sure that we last//
planting kisses on your face
im a winner like i started at the end of the race//
no matta wat ima love you
wat i feel oh god yes this must be true//
your the love of my life
completed oh yea your my future wife//
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Old 10-14-03, 10:41 AM   #2
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Yeah Alota ppl R Left On This Earth And They Wonder Why...
Reminds Me Of My Old Poem,

I'm Sittin Here Wondering Why God Put me On This Earth
My Hearts In So Much Pain And I'm Feelin So Hurt
Gang Fights, Wars, And Loved Ones Die
But I'm Left On This Earth And I Wonder Why..... And So On Lol

Alot Of The Things You Mentioned Tie In With My Topics!

Good Job!

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Old 10-14-03, 10:59 AM   #3
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wow thats interestin
thanks for the feed back much appreciated by your talented peices youve done

uppin for sum more feed back
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