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09-27-03, 10:25 PM
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Meaning of life?
IP: 24A3 0EF0
Life is strange
Diced ways rolling combinations Of blatant hatred and or praise Rifts of phases replace loved faces In tombs of masons My creation...what purpose does it serve On births entry to earth? Im perturbed by this stabbing question Congesting my thinking world And whos that girl named hope? I don’t know She'll fill the voids hole but when? Entry meant but her face is blind Decypher signs in due time But wait in line…hold your horses Reign outside forces Maturities cautious rewards for plaudits Yeh…a metamorphis of age Reach a stage In the spotlights haze lies a job Salary mobs office called plod Ethics dropped…shod of care Slice of the pie?I want my share I swear itt better taste sweet Thats when despairs heat Is cooled downbeat and leaped Frogs born…a heap of spent years Smoke screen clears Tears abate fears and destination docks Shes a perfect knock..i answer And swap finger rocks A Vow in frock maps the path Aftermath…not two childs but three Take a seat of glee And u realise eyes see..procreation is what life means |
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09-27-03, 10:27 PM
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Hmm...
First was thinking this would be a played topic... But your imagery drew me in... Flow wasnt as on point as you usually are... But as always your vocab, emotion and imagery were superb... Nice drop fam... Peep: SS Verse: On the Horizon |
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09-27-03, 10:50 PM
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..Soft Focus..
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IP: 8543 0DC3
definitly a good drop, your vocab is fucking ill, your imaginary is crazy an the flow was tight..i havent read much of yours but this really caught my eye great peice man..an if ya haVE TIME CAN YA CHECK OUT MY PIECE BE YA SELF? THANKS MAN
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09-27-03, 10:56 PM
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Fuck You, I Rhyme Better
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^^what they said
i think your flow was good but i havent read much of you previous work chrit was right, the imagry had me like wow great drop kid... if you would be so kind http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82007 |
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09-27-03, 11:54 PM
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yeah this was a good peice i thought, it was a good read, your flow was good in this peice, your vocab was good as well, i liked this peice, it was a good read overall, keep dropping.
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09-28-03, 02:27 AM
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Banned for being stupid
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IP: 95C5 EAD6
i thought the post was pretty good. the flow was on target, and the wordplay and vocab both were good. the content and topic were pretty original. i thought this was a good read as well. keep postin man, i really enjoyed readin that.
peace..... |
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09-28-03, 08:27 AM
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IP: 24A3 0EF0
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09-28-03, 02:55 PM
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IP: 24A3 0EF0
thanks and upping
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09-28-03, 07:25 PM
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IP: 24A3 0EF0
more feedbak pleas
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09-28-03, 09:53 PM
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IP: 24A3 0EF0
whats a man gotta do to get feeddbak?
give away money? |
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09-28-03, 11:05 PM
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IP: 24A3 0EF0
fuk it.....
give me feedbak....and i'll make sure bash gives u a handjob |
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09-28-03, 11:34 PM
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IP: 1501 77A0
for real i thought the content was dope,
flow was no where to be seen, the piece was just absolute garbage all together wtf? is with all the replies u get? if sand wrote this ppl would be on his dick in 5 seconds what is it with ppl and "net respect" i mean if the man has skills say it, who cares how many posts they have not many ppl who replied actually dropped a reply fgee u didnt use 1 ounce of skill on this, ok i know ur like 50% better then this, this piece was bullshit, and just testing if the ppl who reply to shit are herbs, and yes most of you are, cause u did not even give this man the props he did or did not deserve, first u looked at his post count then went [na i wont even have to read this to drop a reply how can he be dope] for real this was the most garbage thing u wrote lately....... this sucked ass, fgee u have skill i know that u know that but u didnt not use any in this |
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