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Old 12-06-03, 04:50 PM   #1
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Arrow Whats Beef (Remix) - Diss on pacaso mac

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Beat: Whats beef - Biggie

Hook:
Whats beef? beef is wen u kno u cant goto sleep
beef is wen u know i gon creep
beef is wen i drop shit on u for no reason
beef is wen i pull it, and u tweakin
beef is wen u got aint got time to be thinkin
x2

I drop shit on niggas becuz they start-it
Hop along wit yo ice on my wrist
I spit flames at this kids structure, like an arsonist
Make yo departure off RB, cuz u bite my shit then drop it like a depart-men-ist
Grab you cut ur vocal cords, reach deeper
Find my book in ur mind, 'defined' my rhymes in-it
But half this shit, i didnt finish-it, so get-off-it
U aint shit but a biter, I decipher why im dropin-this
But then i remeber u pop-my-shit
P.Min me sayin 'lets battle' you set it up, never came
Cuz he couldnt use his-brain, its insane, he'd prob use my rhyme
Win, and then brag, aint nuttin but a fag

Hook:
Whats beef? beef is wen u kno u cant goto sleep
beef is wen u know i gon creep
beef is wen i drop shit on u for no reason
beef is wen i pull it, and u tweakin
beef is wen u got aint got time to be thinkin
x2

This is beef, takin my hook addin a beat
Dropin it this week, flippin the book, and poppin it on the street
Didnt think i'd catch ya? Betch-ya, u get thugged this week
U made a mistake, fam, even ur men aint goin to ur wake
Ill merk-em-also, Paulo ur brother, bout to get smothered
Mama gettin covered in clips
Dad, already in the grave, cant do shit bout-it
But i wouldnt doubt-it, i prob commited it
'LoCo u on some ridilin shit' - Cut ur shit from ear-to-ear
U kno im sik-wit-it, so spit-it, off ur dome...
Cuz im spittin flames off this shit like a fireplace-at-home
U say u thuggin? u buggin nigga, u live in suburbs, upper class
Fuck-ur-past, u aint neva commited-a-crime
I chiefed wit u, thought u was a real nigga
Thought wrong, now im pissed
Joe Brown couldnt free-u-from-this-decision
Every one can be witnessin-it, I dont care i got u sucked-like-a-pussy
Why the fuck u tryin to push me?

Hook:
Whats beef? beef is wen u kno u cant goto sleep
beef is wen u know i gon creep
beef is wen i drop shit on u for no reason
beef is wen i pull it, and u tweakin
beef is wen u got aint got time to be thinkin
x2

U got beef i gave-it
12x12 the size of ur grave-bitch
Ive already signed u up
Fined-u wit the punishment-of-death
Dont hate, i never said i was the best...
But ima betta den the rest
My uzi is bigger then urs
Go figure, urs is prob mine, the devine god's product
Module of destruction, chemical conbustion
Ur splene gettin ripped open
Hopen u left-town
Cuz now u looked down upon
Fuckin mark.....

Hook:
Whats beef? beef is wen u kno u cant goto sleep
beef is wen u know i gon creep
beef is wen i drop shit on u for no reason
beef is wen i pull it, and u tweakin
beef is wen u got aint got time to be thinkin
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Old 12-06-03, 06:30 PM   #2
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Old 12-06-03, 06:37 PM   #3
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This was straight, on some gangsta shit right here. Going to a nice beat as well. It had a pretty good flow through out the whole thing. Could have used more vocab and multies. But it was a pretty good drop hommie. Keep elevatin...

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Old 12-07-03, 12:06 AM   #4
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Old 12-07-03, 12:28 AM   #5
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yo that had good flow.....i liked it....not the best but its up there....my opinion I think U Used Your Chorus to Much.....but the chorus was still Good...pacaso mac I wont ask Why U hate em........Your structure could use some work but allround a good read Peace 7/0 Kuz (v)
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Old 12-07-03, 12:34 AM   #6
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This was alright i thought.....your flow was pretty good in this though i liked that.....your chorus was good also i thought....your structure could use a touch up though, some of the lines were real short others were kinda long but nothing you cant fix...just keep at it.
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Old 12-07-03, 01:16 AM   #7
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Dont hate, i never said i was the best...
But ima betta den the rest
didnt like this line
it was predictable.
but yo all the rest
beilieve that.
Nice flow everything gg.
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