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un-fuck-widable | 5 | 100.00% | |
Opt1k | 0 | 0% | |
Voters: 5. You may not vote on this poll |
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08-02-05, 11:22 AM | #1 | |
R.A.W Reality Has Began!!
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un-fuck-widable vs Opt1k
IP: CDA8 A0B5
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Topic: Terror 10 - 40 Lines Crew Votes allowed No Recycling No Biting No Cheating Un-fuck-widable cannot be disqualified for having more than 5 open battles... Minimum posts to vote: 40 Check in by: 08-02-05 at 02:22 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
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08-02-05, 11:23 AM | #2 | |
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IP: D40E 67D5
opt1k has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-05 11:23 AM.
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08-02-05, 11:27 AM | #3 | |
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IP: C838 0D4A
un-fuck-widable has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-05 11:27 AM.
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08-02-05, 11:40 AM | #4 | |
Nt Your Average
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IP: C838 0D4A
Terror:
I daveld and faught with the ancients,Decapitated matrons... Kidnaped And masacred the life and intelect of religous patrons/ Fear now cause you've disrupted the Warriors patience's... My Ethics defeat ya purpose like, Death and survival Basics/ I've for-seen Gore, with visionz of Evils own faces... Captured the Pharoes and held'em in there own Matrix/ Ski mask worn and tape over the glock so there aint no traces... With one shot, I'll put you to Eternal Rest in final Breath Paces/ Puttin more men to death than convicted court cases... First crime, I robbed a man of his last breath with shoe laces/ Construct weapons of mass destruction with Einsteins chemical bases... Stun minds as ether act abrassive, I Destroy populated praised places/ I spit facts by the zillions... Ya stereotypical millions... Try to end terror,shoot-to-kill, But end up wastin a brazillion/ Switchin words like last visions, like witnes'n satan pullin the chord... I cut necks and end life when the time comes to 'Swing the Swords'/ Murder Made-men,tourture and rape pure souls until made red... Outta pure hatred,I just open my mouth and lyrically slay men/ I stun minds, Like americans re-using the Metrical system... Recoils from shots, deadly silence after ledtrickle now listen/ Lyrical Ammo, present when i spit more then you can handle... Watch as I draw 'First blood' in a rage for survival, feircer than Rambo/ Gore adores me... this new world it fuckin bores me... I bring nuclear holocaust to the innocent like 'World War Three'/ I crucifie souls, and make the crosses when I spit two lines... World bring back the mutlated soul, as unfuckwidable commits suicide/ shit im crap lol gotta work on this shit gonna start it up
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08-02-05, 11:41 AM | #5 |
Above Originality
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IP: D40E 67D5
So Many Battle Field Scars Dead Always’s On The News
Who Knows Maybe One Day That Could Be Me Or You Holdin My Own Terror Strikin Other People Tryna Stand Tall But Most Of Them Not Even Able Drawn To Fear Like Moths Are With Light You Starts Seeing Clear Start Seein The White Light Heart Beatin Fast Life Fadin Away Not Able To Say Good Bye And Say What U Wanna Say To The People You Love Cuz It Came To Fast Now All Ur Memories Become A Thing In The Past Not Able To Remember Wakin Up In A White Room Then All The Memories Start Rushin Back Too Soon. Not Able To Catch Ur Breathe Life Seepin Through Leaks Out Ur Bmind Bein Blown Mind Far Too Weak Seekin Truth Heart Pumpin Real Anxious But At The Same Time U Stay Calm Real Cautious Noticing People All Staring At You With A Look Lookin Demented And Strange Have There Souls Shook Feelings Real Trauma Fillin Pages Out Like A Book But You Also Gotta Know There Aint No Such Thing As Half Way Crooks Understand That Life Has Its Own Test That Penetrates To You Hardcore Pin Pointin Ur Chest Bout To Burst Into Flames From All This Pain But You Also Should Keep Ur Head Up And Stay In The Game What Doesnt Kill You Makes You Stronger Homie Define That To Me It Means Keep Hard At Work Till The Monkey Off Ur Back Flippin The Script Strikin Terror To Many Foes Holy Day's Golly Way's Gangsta's Slappin Silly Hoe's Born In The Goodness Gracious Of Bringin All Out Fear Have U Hurtin So Much Ur Whole Family Drippin Tears Agility Slashin Bitches Cant Get Rid Of Me Til The Day I Day Home This My Natural Ability Flippin Scripts Crackin Bones Breakin Necks Waitn At The End Yellin Out Tell Me Who Next
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08-02-05, 11:55 AM | #6 | |
R.A.W Reality Has Began!!
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IP: CDA8 A0B5
Voted For: un-fuck-widable
i guess that this vote deserves to go to unfuck.....he had more confidence in his work and had lots of multis...above all the vocab work was nicely done and so was the punches....u were bored so u done a lot of multis...no arguing with that....i guess that if ur bored u make a lot of multies.... nice drop opt1k.. i liked your flow.....it was structured better and it flowed easily...but i just didnt quite feel that this was your best...i hav seen you perform but this aint half of that...a bit of elevation shud get u this vote Vote unfuckwidable!!!!
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08-02-05, 12:56 PM | #7 | |
Savage Prophet
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IP: 8EB8 DAA3
Voted For: un-fuck-widable
i like un fuck widables verse better it flowed and had metaphors and many punchlines
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08-02-05, 01:54 PM | #8 | |
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IP: D1A9 F8DE
Voted For: un-fuck-widable
ok Opt1k urs seemed to much like a song which is really bad for this topic and u never stuck to one thing like half way crooks from dying soldiers dont make that much sense man. Also ur vocab was slipping every now and then Ancious dont rhyme with cautious lol. I think unf did a great job I loved his piece. Both keep writing.
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08-02-05, 03:15 PM | #9 | |
Nt Your Average
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IP: 4DAD 7A21
upping........................vote n i will rtf ......
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08-02-05, 06:09 PM | #10 | |
Nt Your Average
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IP: 4DAD 7A21
uppin............................................. ..........
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08-02-05, 06:12 PM | #11 |
Above Originality
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IP: D40E 67D5
uppin hahaha..................yea uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!
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08-02-05, 09:13 PM | #12 |
Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
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This was feedback posted for opt1k
IP: 0D11 88C9
checcccckkkkkiiiiinnnnnnnn pollllllllllszzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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STARTING 2MORROW I WILL BE TRIPLE SIXES THATS GON BE MY NEW ACCOUNT SO THATS ME AIGHT CUZ IM SO FLY......LOL |
08-02-05, 09:48 PM | #13 |
Middle Weight
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IP: BD78 BFC2
Voted For: un-fuck-widable
VOTE IN LINK BELOW \/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/ http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202755 terrible topical battle eva...... ok...this topic for this battle was horiible.And then the verses were just.But...I topicals are versy different from battlin... you guys need to word your stuff better.You guys were all over the place. As for flow and such...Opt1k had a newb structure...and a very basic rhyme scheme. Content was bland.But Opt1k..ya can't just go around stating shit...ya gotta use metas and shit. Weak topical but I gotta give it to Vote-Un-Fuck -widable |
08-02-05, 09:51 PM | #14 |
Above Originality
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IP: D40E 67D5
yea man i know i need work at that shit homie but topic aint really bout metaz man its about the lyrics and how it relates to the topic adn yea i hated the topic but that what he wanted
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08-02-05, 09:53 PM | #15 | |
Middle Weight
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IP: BD78 BFC2
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Topicals do need some metas homie. Ya can't just go blantatly staing shit out of the blue.Ya gotta leave shit for interpretation for the reader |
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