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Old 08-11-06, 09:16 PM   #1
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Hot!!! Me and Crew's First song: Apology Lullaby
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next time read the rules and drop your two links
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Old 08-11-06, 10:33 PM   #2
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Old 08-11-06, 11:19 PM   #3
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I didn't really like the beat's intro sounded Fruity Loop-ish.

Singing is ok, could be mixing alot better, 1st guy I wasn't really feeling, same with the second guy. The rapping just sounds amateurish especially next to the singing. Just needs more work basically, but it is a first song. The last rap verse showed the most promise.

the overall mixing needs some tweeking as well.
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Old 08-11-06, 11:28 PM   #4
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yeah, it's unfurnished but thnx for the feed
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Old 08-12-06, 06:45 AM   #5
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where are your linx?


ima drop feed anyways



umm...bet idk not really feeling it

hook was sincere..nice thats the only part i liked most

dude on the first verse had a pretty nice voice..he shudnt have rap/sang instead just rap wud be nicer


lyrics in general were a lil too repititive...only the 2guys on the third verse had something a lil different from the others and a different flow/style...



um idk if i wud replay this track but yeah its decent at least it made sense!


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