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07-07-08, 02:15 AM | #1 | |||||
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*Contendorship Match* Ramcees ( 5 ) vs. Flight ( 5 )
IP: EBB4 6039
Ramcees vs Flight
Due times: Check in due Wednesday 11.59pm EST. - if you don't check in by this time, and you DO end up posting, -2 votes. Verses due by Friday 11.59pm EST. Yeah, that's eastern. not pacific. Lateness = -2 votes even IF your opponent allows you to post late. Max. extension = 24 hours, to be granted by your opponent. Line limits: 10 min and 20 max. for regular battles. 16 min and no max in champ matches. If no line limit agreed, second battler to post must match first battler. But ultimately, first battler gets to set the line number by how much he posts. Goodluck.
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07-07-08, 09:03 AM | #2 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: 306E C16B
Check...16
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07-08-08, 07:13 AM | #3 | |||||
aka'd
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IP: 9E12 3286
yeah, whatever.
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07-09-08, 04:10 PM | #4 | |||||
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IP: 9E12 3286
fuck this bitch, lets switch it up, i'll be the one to push and pull
so i take this Ram by the horns, cause he's got a hold of all the bull yeah thats right, you're shit, and don't act like its not fucking true see i'm fly for real... they just fucking buzz around you and what a fucking loser, seriously, i'm tired of being nice cause when he says 'check 16', thats just the fucking girls he likes see my name is for my punches, so bitch, my hits wont be subtle cause when i fucking spit, i'll make sure Ramcees nothing but knuckles there's just no dodging me, i'm dropping hot, and never stop attacking, man cause when i bring in my seige, i just keep fucking battering Ram i'll shut ya down, seriously i'm not playing, no need to make it tragic i'm getting rid of RAM faster than computer porn addicts this battle is a joke, you bow to me, so just fucking stop, bitch cause if you ever won the contendor ship... i'd make sure to throw you off it so i'll finish wrecking this bitch, fuck rights, ima break the whore's neck cause Cee'll get clubbed so fucking badly... i'll have PETA on my doorstep
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07-11-08, 09:06 PM | #5 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: 306E C16B
kid ima stunner, I come with concepts, that’ll totally wreck ya
He acting all prepared for this battle…like he came in a stretcher Ya got nothing between da ears, of course im droppin u w/ ease voters are only leaning towards You…cuz they enjoying da breeze u aint on my level, only ppl w/ a fear of heights should battle u clown cuz here punches can take Flight, w/ out ever leavin the fukin ground dude, im juz slappin u around, im not about to disappoint my crowd Unless its Your funeral tomorrow……I aint letting No Body Down! Cats sayin this’ll be a tight match up, u gotta be shitting me Dudes? Of Course he rolls with the punches, he rolled wen I kicked him too! im takin this serious man, I hope u didn think I was playin with you So if I just killed off all ur Chances, im sorry…I was aiming for you I always knew I was intimidating…but its a lot worst then it seemed Cuz this dude fumbled a line, every time…I looked up at my screen u shoulda taken this Chance, n tried to drop somethin really sick son Cuz u was always going out on a limb…I just havnt decided which 1
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07-11-08, 11:32 PM | #6 | |||||||
New to RV
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IP: 16F8 6259
fuck this bitch, lets switch it up, i'll be the one to push and pull
so i take this Ram by the horns, cause he's got a hold of all the bull weak yeah thats right, you're shit, and don't act like its not fucking true see i'm fly for real... they just fucking buzz around you no and what a fucking loser, seriously, i'm tired of being nice cause when he says 'check 16', thats just the fucking girls he likes wackerz see my name is for my punches, so bitch, my hits wont be subtle cause when i fucking spit, i'll make sure Ramcees nothing but knuckles too obvious of nameplay w/o a punch. and i'm sure it's played on him. there's just no dodging me, i'm dropping hot, and never stop attacking, man cause when i bring in my seige, i just keep fucking battering Ram seen it used better on him i'll shut ya down, seriously i'm not playing, no need to make it tragic i'm getting rid of RAM faster than computer porn addicts again, seen better. this battle is a joke, you bow to me, so just fucking stop, bitch cause if you ever won the contendor ship... i'd make sure to throw you off it too bland so i'll finish wrecking this bitch, fuck rights, ima break the whore's neck cause Cee'll get clubbed so fucking badly... i'll have PETA on my doorstep i've used this concept and imo, i used it better. you really need to work on your wording. you had some decent concepts (although mostly played) but i've seen them worded so much better. your wording lacks sting which takes away from your entire verse. kid ima stunner, I come with concepts, that’ll totally wreck ya He acting all prepared for this battle…like he came in a stretcher played and weak wording. Ya got nothing between da ears, of course im droppin u w/ ease voters are only leaning towards You…cuz they enjoying da breeze bland. u aint on my level, only ppl w/ a fear of heights should battle u clown cuz here punches can take Flight, w/ out ever leavin the fukin ground this seems too obvious but cool nameplay. dude, im juz slappin u around, im not about to disappoint my crowd Unless its Your funeral tomorrow……I aint letting No Body Down! weak. Cats sayin this’ll be a tight match up, u gotta be shitting me Dudes? Of Course he rolls with the punches, he rolled wen I kicked him too! ok. im takin this serious man, I hope u didn think I was playin with you So if I just killed off all ur Chances, im sorry…I was aiming for you ok, cool I always knew I was intimidating…but its a lot worst then it seemed Cuz this dude fumbled a line, every time…I looked up at my screen no, that was corny. u shoulda taken this Chance, n tried to drop somethin really sick son Cuz u was always going out on a limb…I just havnt decided which 1 played i've seen you drop way better than this. idk wtf you were doing here, if you took it easy or what. disappointed in this battle, though i'd have at least one decent verse to read...ram had better wording. vote-Ramcees
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07-12-08, 02:41 AM | #7 | |||||||
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IP: D088 20AB
Flight
fuck this bitch, lets switch it up, i'll be the one to push and pull so i take this Ram by the horns, cause he's got a hold of all the bull Not bad, I dig it. yeah thats right, you're shit, and don't act like its not fucking true see i'm fly for real... they just fucking buzz around you This is sick. and what a fucking loser, seriously, i'm tired of being nice cause when he says 'check 16', thats just the fucking girls he likes Nice, good punch. see my name is for my punches, so bitch, my hits wont be subtle cause when i fucking spit, i'll make sure Ramcees nothing but knuckles Not bad. there's just no dodging me, i'm dropping hot, and never stop attacking, man cause when i bring in my seige, i just keep fucking battering Ram Not bad. i'll shut ya down, seriously i'm not playing, no need to make it tragic i'm getting rid of RAM faster than computer porn addicts Hahaha, good shit. this battle is a joke, you bow to me, so just fucking stop, bitch cause if you ever won the contendor ship... i'd make sure to throw you off it Meh so i'll finish wrecking this bitch, fuck rights, ima break the whore's neck cause Cee'll get clubbed so fucking badly... i'll have PETA on my doorstep Perfect. Vs. Ramcees kid ima stunner, I come with concepts, that’ll totally wreck ya He acting all prepared for this battle…like he came in a stretcher Generic. Ya got nothing between da ears, of course im droppin u w/ ease voters are only leaning towards You…cuz they enjoying da breeze Nah. u aint on my level, only ppl w/ a fear of heights should battle u clown cuz here punches can take Flight, w/ out ever leavin the fukin ground Nice. dude, im juz slappin u around, im not about to disappoint my crowd Unless its Your funeral tomorrow……I aint letting No Body Down! Okay. Cats sayin this’ll be a tight match up, u gotta be shitting me Dudes? Of Course he rolls with the punches, he rolled wen I kicked him too! Nice. im takin this serious man, I hope u didn think I was playin with you So if I just killed off all ur Chances, im sorry…I was aiming for you Not bad. I always knew I was intimidating…but its a lot worst then it seemed Cuz this dude fumbled a line, every time…I looked up at my screen Nah u shoulda taken this Chance, n tried to drop somethin really sick son Cuz u was always going out on a limb…I just havnt decided which 1 Meh Not a bad battle I suppose, but I have Flight taking this, so yeah.. Vote: Flight |
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07-12-08, 05:31 PM | #8 | ||||
Peace, Love, Unity
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IP: 9244 687A
kid ima stunner, I come with concepts, that’ll totally wreck ya
He acting all prepared for this battle…like he came in a stretcher ^Naaaah. Ya got nothing between da ears, of course im droppin u w/ ease voters are only leaning towards You…cuz they enjoying da breeze ^Naaaah. u aint on my level, only ppl w/ a fear of heights should battle u clown cuz here punches can take Flight, w/ out ever leavin the fukin ground ^Pretty good. dude, im juz slappin u around, im not about to disappoint my crowd Unless its Your funeral tomorrow……I aint letting No Body Down! ^Naaaah. Cats sayin this’ll be a tight match up, u gotta be shitting me Dudes? Of Course he rolls with the punches, he rolled wen I kicked him too! ^Not bad. im takin this serious man, I hope u didn think I was playin with you So if I just killed off all ur Chances, im sorry…I was aiming for you ^Not bad. I always knew I was intimidating…but its a lot worst then it seemed Cuz this dude fumbled a line, every time…I looked up at my screen Naaaah. u shoulda taken this Chance, n tried to drop somethin really sick son Cuz u was always going out on a limb…I just havnt decided which 1 ^Alright. fuck this bitch, lets switch it up, i'll be the one to push and pull so i take this Ram by the horns, cause he's got a hold of all the bull ^Decent. yeah thats right, you're shit, and don't act like its not fucking true see i'm fly for real... they just fucking buzz around you ^Naaah. and what a fucking loser, seriously, i'm tired of being nice cause when he says 'check 16', thats just the fucking girls he likes ^Haha. see my name is for my punches, so bitch, my hits wont be subtle cause when i fucking spit, i'll make sure Ramcees nothing but knuckles ^Pretty sick. there's just no dodging me, i'm dropping hot, and never stop attacking, man cause when i bring in my seige, i just keep fucking battering Ram ^Pretty sick. Though I've seen a similar concept. i'll shut ya down, seriously i'm not playing, no need to make it tragic i'm getting rid of RAM faster than computer porn addicts ^Lmao. this battle is a joke, you bow to me, so just fucking stop, bitch cause if you ever won the contendor ship... i'd make sure to throw you off it ^Haha. so i'll finish wrecking this bitch, fuck rights, ima break the whore's neck cause Cee'll get clubbed so fucking badly... i'll have PETA on my doorstep ^Haha. Damn. Pretty good battle. I thought as I started reading Flight's verse that he wouldn't take this, but he really picked it up and came with some funny ass punches and that were very consistent. Ram, you had a pretty good verse but it fell off at some points. Great battle though. V/Flight |
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07-13-08, 02:19 AM | #9 | |||||
The story goes. Bill, B.
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IP: 59DF E5E2
pretty close battle. i'm gonna have to go with flight. started off kinda slow but really picked up near the end and took it home. it could have just as easily swung either way and there is no real wrong answer.
vote: flight
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07-13-08, 02:39 PM | #10 | |||||||
Thank You, Come Again
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IP: 4E8C 6C2D
v/ Flight.. I dont wanna get detailed
buuttt he had a few more punches hittin harder,, When you vote make sure you go into a little more detail, state a few punches you liked or disliked etc. One or two line voting will not count, but seeing as this isn't a deciding vote I'll let it slide. Just try to get a little more detailed next time man. Thanks -Lay
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07-14-08, 12:45 AM | #11 | ||||
Jack The Ripper
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IP: F540 07B2
fuck this bitch, lets switch it up, i'll be the one to push and pull
so i take this Ram by the horns, cause he's got a hold of all the bull this was pretty weak, the ram nameplay could been used better yeah thats right, you're shit, and don't act like its not fucking true see i'm fly for real... they just fucking buzz around you dopeness yo still could worded it better tho but +1 and what a fucking loser, seriously, i'm tired of being nice cause when he says 'check 16', thats just the fucking girls he likes lol i the check 16 was aight, but u ruined it with the wording see my name is for my punches, so bitch, my hits wont be subtle cause when i fucking spit, i'll make sure Ramcees nothing but knuckles nah weak wordplay there's just no dodging me, i'm dropping hot, and never stop attacking, man cause when i bring in my seige, i just keep fucking battering Ram dope wordplay +2 i'll shut ya down, seriously i'm not playing, no need to make it tragic i'm getting rid of RAM faster than computer porn addicts was aight +3 this battle is a joke, you bow to me, so just fucking stop, bitch cause if you ever won the contendor ship... i'd make sure to throw you off it nah seen this concept already and it's weak anyways so i'll finish wrecking this bitch, fuck rights, ima break the whore's neck cause Cee'll get clubbed so fucking badly... i'll have PETA on my doorstep this was straight, +4 vs. kid ima stunner, I come with concepts, that’ll totally wreck ya He acting all prepared for this battle…like he came in a stretcher too simple though Ya got nothing between da ears, of course im droppin u w/ ease voters are only leaning towards You…cuz they enjoying da breeze i dont even get this and dont think its good anyways u aint on my level, only ppl w/ a fear of heights should battle u clown cuz here punches can take Flight, w/ out ever leavin the fukin ground this was aight +1, coulda worded it better tho dude, im juz slappin u around, im not about to disappoint my crowd Unless its Your funeral tomorrow……I aint letting No Body Down! lol, this wad dope +2 Cats sayin this’ll be a tight match up, u gotta be shitting me Dudes? Of Course he rolls with the punches, he rolled wen I kicked him too! i like this, it's decent +3 im takin this serious man, I hope u didn think I was playin with you So if I just killed off all ur Chances, im sorry…I was aiming for you this was aight but i can't quote it I always knew I was intimidating…but its a lot worst then it seemed Cuz this dude fumbled a line, every time…I looked up at my screen really wack u shoulda taken this Chance, n tried to drop somethin really sick son Cuz u was always going out on a limb…I just havnt decided which 1 plaaayeedd Ramcees ur decent, but stop using played rhymes or simple rhymes, use more rhymes like that "funeral, not letting no body down" shit cuz when u start using clever wordplay like that, that's when u'll start winning all your matches Flight, you did ya thing, but i feel sometimes u got sick concepts but then you dont word them into sick punches and it means nothing so i cant quote them, work on that and try and have set ups that are relevant to the next line not random stuff so i got this 4-3 for Flight v/flight |
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07-14-08, 01:04 AM | #12 | |||||
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IP: EBB4 6039
Flight wins 5 to 1.
Flight ( 7 ) and Ramcees ( 4 )
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