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Old 09-04-06, 08:12 PM   #1
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The West Aint Dead ft. Balance

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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4402173
Check it out

new song

FUCKIN FIRE

we on that mixtape music!!! this is real shit!!!

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Old 09-05-06, 01:56 PM   #2
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Beat: Dre.... Chronic 2001....

Over dubs on this track.... kinda have you sounding like Kon... lol...

1st Verse: flow and delivery is tight... no complaints there... you on that Gangsta shit here.... the vocals is soundin tyte.... juss them over Dubs... LMAO...

Hook: Simple... but effective for this track..

2nd Verse: Ya boi here got a swagger... but it seems a tad forced.. sounds like a young Game... lol... but he did his thing....

7.5/10

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Old 09-05-06, 02:54 PM   #3
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i liek the fade out of the dre beat obviously sends a nice message
like the hook sends a cool message
verse had nice flow i like the ovedubbs lyrically you came nice delivery ws cool
your boy balance is kinda hot sounds like hes tryign to be game so he sounds kinda fake to me his flow is good his vocals are a little too loud
i mena really the hook made the track you came really nice on it
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Old 09-06-06, 11:24 AM   #4
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this track is aiight but in general it's pretty simple cuz it's just a "rep my set" type track...beat's real laid back, which works for and against you cuz you shouldn've came harder on this beat to make the track harder

hook's simple but that fit, verses could've been better though
those were rather simple as well


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Old 09-06-06, 11:54 AM   #5
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Beat = appropriate for this track

vibe = chill = not bad

PT...real smooth and mellow...I liked it.


Hook: Decent...could have more ooomph


2nd cat...nice flow


Both Emcees repped on this


7/10 track tho



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Old 09-06-06, 09:47 PM   #6
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The WEST IS DEAD WHEN IT FALL OFF THE U.S. but on the real this track was nice.. I was feelin it. EVerything flowed nicely. RTF on my new track
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Old 09-07-06, 01:11 AM   #7
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Pretty decent track from my boy past tense

First verse: was nice and smooth but it sounded like the first bar was a lil scratchy for you to do but it got smoother, cool flow.

Hook was ehh, aight i really needed a west track for my rv mixtape anyway, it was cool i'm just not a big west fan but yall repped it on this

next verse balance was a little loud but he was serious bout his, his flo was off the chain and stuff but both verses were too laid back for their own good

overall i give it a 7/10

this was a cool track though


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Old 09-07-06, 04:59 AM   #8
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haha - illy beat, aint heard this in a minute. Quality is good on the first verse. Nice effect on the intro too. Adlibs seem off a bit, but I kinda like how you tryna make em real breathy for a two way feel on one verse. Always a nice touch. Verse seems a little basic wordplay wise, but it's jus basically tellin people what you bout so I feel you. 2nd dude - quality seems a little worse, but still not bad. I like this dudes voice, its somethin different. Good verse. Nice track, ionno bout the bridge outro thing tho. It's aight. word. Overall pretty good.

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Old 09-07-06, 05:20 AM   #9
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