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02-09-05, 11:43 AM | #1 | ||||
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unfinished rap - preview
IP: 3450 F354
im wrkin on an instrumental right now an am wonderin wht u fink of these lyrix so i kno how to improve dem, if dey need any or not....... take yo time an drop a reply.......gud or bad....dnt bother me- jus b str8
(........startin bit..........true story) Since the age of 2, had to deal with complications Nearly lost a father, life saving operations Tryna make it on ma own - Not alone from situations Flickin through ma raps - Changin radio channle stations Tryna find the key - To flee from misery People runing our life causin this insanity Single mother of 6 not much money to feed Living from the gov - Aint much money for me Now i tred in this life, learned to be more wiser,provide her Not letting the hardships divide her |
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02-10-05, 03:57 PM | #2 | ||||
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IP: 3450 F354
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02-10-05, 09:50 PM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: A4E7 A821
It seems a little basic and although the words are yours it doesn't quite seem your hearts in it. If this was really your life, pull the emotion straight from your heart and the memories straight from your mind. Check out my poem "diamond in the sky and you'll see what i mean. peace
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02-10-05, 09:51 PM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: A4E7 A821
Sorry by the way it's in poetic scriptures not in open mic, looking forward to more of your text holla
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My SpellBook Fuck being creative, you guys have certainly given up on it
GET DOPER Knowledge is Power, Stop being Weak The Legend of Blackmage Featuring such heads as...Tha Q, 9th degree, Enygma,The green team, Big J and probably you! SO DON'T SLEEP!Coming soon to a soundclick near you...
........Shit.....Nigga.......
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02-11-05, 04:28 AM | #5 | ||||
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IP: 5DA0 2C1D
sfe seen.............my raps in poetic scriptures or ures???
......dat woz jus like da breif startin of my rap, da emotion , i decided is gunna cum frm da center of ma peice..........dats kinda like a startin summary, if u kno wht i mean............by da way , nice AKUMA PIC, U INTO STREET FIGHTER...HEVI GAME AKUMAS ONE OF MA FAV CARACTERS LOL ANYWAYS TNX, AM OUT ~1~
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02-11-05, 04:31 AM | #6 | ||||
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IP: 5DA0 2C1D
sfe seen.............my raps in poetic scriptures or ures???
......dat woz jus like da breif startin of my rap, da emotion , i decided is gunna cum frm da center of ma peice..........dats kinda like a startin summary, if u kno wht i mean............by da way , nice AKUMA PIC, U INTO STREET FIGHTER...HEVI GAME AKUMAS ONE OF MA FAV CARACTERS LOL ANYWAYS TNX, AM OUT ~1~ ... sos dat woz ma oda account lol....da one abuv |
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