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05-18-04, 10:48 PM | #1 | |||||||
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What IF??
IP: 6C6C C179
I sat around thinkin about the strongest word in the world and I came up with IF. Check it out:
As I grow older and my days turn to nights I often wonder what my life could have been like What If I had taken that job out in California would I know what china white go for on the corner? What if God chose someone else to be a father would DJ get the same love if she were his daughter? What if I didn't smoke when I went to Rob's Would I still wrecked my car & lost my job? What if I didn't make the decison to be my own man Would my parents finally understand? What if I didn't choose Crystal over Michelle would my life still be a living hell? What if I was raised by my mother and dad would I write about them in every song I had? What if I knew then what I knew now Would I still be who I am now? In the crossroads of life people are put in a position but once that choice is made you gotta live with that decision In the times of stormy clouds and percipitation One must act without fear of hesitation What if facing adversity or percecution would my faith be shook by threats of execution? As I grow older and my days turn to nights I no longer wonder what life could be like IF..................... Last edited by Indo : 05-19-04 at 04:29 PM. |
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05-19-04, 12:44 PM | #2 | |||||
(00)O=(00) <-- I will knock you the fuck out........
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IP: 5C5F 906E
thats some serious shyt.....props man that is a really strong song man it realy makes u think about all ur choices overall really good................................
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05-20-04, 01:18 PM | #3 | |||
GrOwN aSs MaN
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IP: 3240 794D
yea real deep here...would be even doper with more multies in the rhymes
good abstract imagery nice flow 1 |
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05-20-04, 06:54 PM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: C1DA C961
Very nice concept, original
I liked it alot Good lines, alot of realism here... |
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