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Old 04-15-05, 11:05 PM   #1
J. Luth
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Hate it Or Love it (Weerd.....) :cool:

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yea, for audio track i'm doin' on Hate it or love it beat. fashos...

(chorusx2)
Hate it or love it, the underdogs on top
And I'm gon shine, homie, until my heart stop
Go 'head envy me, I'm raps MVP
And I ain't goin' nowhere so you can get to kno me


16 years old, man, and I spit it on the dot
Tryin' to take this rap weight, straight hit it to the top
Shit I won't stop, when these dicks wanna pop
Got this shit on lock, ain't no bitch wit a glock
Everyone against me, man, it's me against the world
Time to take all this hating, that's immense, for a twirl
Gold, silver on my neck, reppin' faith and pride
If you got a problem wit me, man, say it don't hide
But they gon ride,fly poppin' wit the mouth
They be boppin' it about, so I be knockin' fools out
Shinin' jewels out, thinkin' people be afraid
But that shit can make yo known home, equal to yo grave
Gotta play it safe, or yo girl be mimin' rape
They might even go for you, take your body lined in tape
Never actin' fake, man, and keep yo own friends
Or jus like Biggie and Pac, you gon end

(chorusx2)
Hate it or love it, the underdogs on top
And I'm gon shine, homie, until my heart stop
Go 'head envy me, I'm raps MVP
And I ain't goin' nowhere so you can get to kno me


No matter what people say, man, I keep my steam flowin'
Got the snooze button on, man, I keep my dream goin'
Bright gleam glowin', nothin' ever keeps me down
Got a gun, who cares, even if I see the round
Try to beat me down, guarantee you'll end up dirty
You be bruised black and blue, like Duke road jersey
Do this shit for thirty more years, that's how I feel
Depression and pain I yield, but wit rap, now I heal
But people tryin' to steal, my joy, like known thugs
Funny how my biggest haters all share my own blood
But I jus shrug, and rub, the bug away
Man, I ain't feelin' no love, I might as well jus run away
But if I don't stay, throwin' education out
End up in the streets where homies sprayin' all about
Layin' bodies out, shit, man, I'm done here
Whether you hate it or love it, yo, I'm out in one year


(chorusx2)
Hate it or love it, the underdogs on top
And I'm gon shine, homie, until my heart stop
Go 'head envy me, I'm raps MVP
And I ain't goin' nowhere so you can get to kno me


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Old 04-15-05, 11:12 PM   #2
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Old 04-15-05, 11:12 PM   #3
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pretty good shit...cant wait to hear it in audio........
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Old 04-15-05, 11:16 PM   #4
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I can't wait neither, or either, w/e yo.
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Old 04-15-05, 11:53 PM   #5
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hmmmmmmmmm...it flows nice but your not really saying nothing u mention a few topics but don't really stick wit one...its more of a brag track but its got no punchlines....u shoulda threw a few good punches in there if u was gon brag...vocab is real basic...pop, stop, top...this are ya rhyming words man...u should up those slightly an make them multie syllabe rhymes it would flow iller an be unique from what game & 50 did....cuz as is now its basically gonna flow liek original track an jus be in your voice...u wanna own the beat an out-do the original so a rewrite would prolly make this way iller.
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Old 04-16-05, 09:11 AM   #6
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basically what Triple n said...but I kinda liked this though...audio this shit...can't wait lol..rtf on my battle....
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Old 04-16-05, 09:54 AM   #7
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Hmm...You probably should've just waited until you recorded it to post it...I really don't see why you did this...But anyways, it was iight man...I know it'll be fire on the mic, so let me know when you got that up homie...1
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Old 04-16-05, 11:00 PM   #8
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I liked this a lot better then your other song, the pop it or wt/v this was hot, good shit, hook was better then the other chorus on your old song, this was nice, and I found it more original, not as thuggish ima kill yo ass foo', lol, but I find the 1st verse and 2nd verse kinda were a different topic iunno, but still nice, 8.5/10 rtf on my next open mic, song lyrics, keep an eye out
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Old 04-16-05, 11:12 PM   #9
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^yup appreciate it. And yo pop it was like from last yr. lmao but props
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