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02-17-04, 10:04 AM | #1 | ||||||
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who am i to we?
IP: 1769 3B0F
It’s the grand deception-allured to mans perception-
That order is found in governmental borders and perfection. While the lawyers give money attention- We ignore ghettos and polices’ mediocore protection- It has nothing to do wit complection. Now days there ‘s another form of racism….. If your lower class- you kiss upper ass- The only color running the country is the green of cash. Sometimes the light at the end of the tunnel- Is only found at the end of funnels. Cause paradice has a price and ten dollars temporarely buys a better life. And it ain’t right,,,,until it is…. nobodies righteous- Death is rest cause being alive means a breath living lifeless. the cost of surviving examples proof nothing is priceless. YET Time is timeless…….. But mine’s limited if my watch and battery don’t work together- So I use a sundile in hopes my life cycle lasts forever. And if I die tomorrow have no sarrow ….. burry me face down to project- That I don’t want to be remembered cause ill never look back or regret. we claymation fake real interpretations…… born without remoarse or emotion- So when they say do we have a heart? Tell them to check the warranty and promotion. see you look in the mirror and see an image so marvelous- But my reflection sees emptiness with no purpose and worthless. Nothing makes us distinct-we all hold a killer instinct- They don’t live where we from and if they did projects would be presincts. Im ….trying ….to ….make …..myself ….a …..better ….man- But human cloning isn’t authorized so for now I survive with my human hands. If my tears could speak they would describe how I lost my faith- But till then they spell hate- tattooed to a withered face. I wont be blind!!!!!!!!!!!!!for now I can see- Im not you but am what you made me. |
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02-17-04, 10:10 AM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 6F9E F23B
Gud drop...gud drop...Liked some of the imagery, wordplay and vocab...
Strong drop...8/10 Check my fatigue (the Author's enemy) drop in my sig |
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02-17-04, 10:14 AM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: 903D AF91
Nice piece dawg......Its dope
Nice Structure and Vocab....It Kept Me Entertained......8/10 is what i rate this piece wit
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02-17-04, 03:56 PM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: 5AF5 5CA5
i always like the way you structure your drops, shows that all bars dont need to be even.... as some people think...lol... as usual full of nice vocab... what more can i say.... up to your usual standard..... keep em coming twin....
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