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Old 05-24-05, 09:23 PM   #1
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Old 05-25-05, 12:23 AM   #2
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Pretty nice drop...rhyme scheme was good, and tha topic was cool. Tha title was tru, it was pretty deep.

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Old 05-25-05, 06:18 AM   #3
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thanks, uppin for more
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Old 05-25-05, 02:07 PM   #4
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Good poem man, i liked the concept, you stayed on point throughout, vocabulary was perfect for this piece, you definatley have a way with words,keep dropping.1
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Old 05-25-05, 02:40 PM   #5
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real nice drop....loved the rhyme scheme you used and the way one line flawlessly flowed into the next, nice vocab and nice imagery, a real original piece.......keep dropping
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Old 05-25-05, 04:09 PM   #6
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thanks ya'll. uppin for more
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