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05-24-05, 09:23 PM | #1 | |||
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The Light Of Dreams....(DEEP)
IP: 0086 7B47
Removed - Plagiarized Poem *will edit links in later* |
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05-25-05, 12:23 AM | #2 | ||||
Light Weight
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IP: 0825 899A
Pretty nice drop...rhyme scheme was good, and tha topic was cool. Tha title was tru, it was pretty deep.
Overall...8/10 RTF on one of tha links in my sig |
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05-25-05, 06:18 AM | #3 | |||
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IP: 0086 7B47
thanks, uppin for more
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05-25-05, 02:07 PM | #4 | |||||
<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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IP: 28AD 5545
Good poem man, i liked the concept, you stayed on point throughout, vocabulary was perfect for this piece, you definatley have a way with words,keep dropping.1
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05-25-05, 02:40 PM | #5 | |||
**the council**
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IP: EFC1 971E
real nice drop....loved the rhyme scheme you used and the way one line flawlessly flowed into the next, nice vocab and nice imagery, a real original piece.......keep dropping
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05-25-05, 04:09 PM | #6 | |||
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IP: 0086 7B47
thanks ya'll. uppin for more
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