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05-16-04, 02:46 AM | #1 | |||||||
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First Collaboration In Rb Nistory
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FIRST COLLABORATION IN RB NISTORY
Collaboration between SPUL & TRIPLE N Spul wrote 1st and 2nd verse, Triple N wrote 3rd verse an chorus, please give us some feedback, holla!!!! Chorus I dare you niggas to mumble sum Better believe its gon get troublesom Not one of you bitch niggas is wantin' nun Cuz we stay chewin' out niggas like bubble gum Blastin' out punches like automatic guns Cookin you mothafuckas like burgers, well dun Merkin' you all, survivors there won't be one Cuz on this mic we stay merkin' niggas for fun Yo, I never understood… why these niggas wanna hate They wanna get me down… prove that I be fake If you think that you can beat me… then fuckin’ STEP UP!!! If you be too afraid… then go suck your left nut!!! I have niggas in the surgery room, more times than Pam Anderson They front too many times, so I get their asses canned for fun When they try to spit… all that comes out is shit Man, they betta split, cuz I’ma ‘bout to have ‘em hit More times than they did their mom’s clit, wit their own fuckin’ dicks My fire is now lit, I’ll have their body full of slits Now you betta sit… cuz I’ma make this shit personal I’ll go out for yo family… wit my heavy ursenal To me this ain’t a game… cuz I don’t like to do no playin’ Cuz if you fuck wit me… I’ll make sure yo ass is payin’ Those motherfuckers are all gay, for shovin’ rods up their fuckin’ tushies I’ll shove one in their mouths… and then call ‘em all pussies chorus I dare you niggas to mumble sum Better believe its gon get troublesom Not one of you bitch niggas is wantin' nun Cuz we stay chewin' out niggas like bubble gum Blastin' out punches like automatic guns Cookin you mothafuckas like burgers, well dun Merkin' you all, survivors there won't be one Cuz on this mic we stay merkin' niggas for fun I’m only 15, turnin’ 16, but I rip shit like I’m sixty Nah, I’m not talkin’ about gassin’. Cuz that shit sure don’t fit me I’m speakin’ about my technique… that runs this rap game It is such a unique style… it’s sure to bring me fame But I’m not famous, yet. But then again, I’m pretty young It might be better stayin’ this way, cuz look at William Hung They make him famous for suckin’… man, that’s a mortal sin “WB’s Superstar”, they even make a TV show jus for him But I’d rather prefer… to be the way I am Cuz the rap game needs me… the same way wool needs lamb My spits are all hot… and my style is oh so zealous My verses even make… Eminem feel so jealous In da club when I spit my shit… all the haters wanna fight They try to throw themselves onto me. Man, that shit ain’t right My rhymes are WAY tighter… than Michael Jackson’s ass After he shoves all the dicks in it, from the whole first grade class chorus I dare you niggas to mumble sum Better believe its gon get troublesom Not one of you bitch niggas is wantin' nun Cuz we stay chewin' out niggas like bubble gum Blastin' out punches like automatic guns Cookin you mothafuckas like burgers, well dun Merkin' you all, survivors there won't be one Cuz on this mic we stay merkin' niggas for fun Triple's Verse Its hard not to title me rap's next great Cuz my rhymes are hot enuff to heat 3 states A real lyricist nowadays is demandable Other mc's fearing me is understandable Cuz I was profiled on the discovery channel An scientists confirmed… that I'm an animal But when I'm on the mic… I'm a Lyrical cannibal Eatin' so many niggas u'd think my first name's Hannibal Test me if you will, but its gonna be a bad outcome Like walkin' in a lion's nest… nigga, that's really dumb So, the next question is where do you go from here? You make it a profession an take it to next gear Opposers get popped, makin' sure they drop These are the necessities when u at the top Protectin' myself, stay wit the mac but not talkin' bout apple Stay gusslin' niggas an twistin' they caps like snapple Closes with chorus I dare you niggas to mumble sum Better believe its gon get troublesom Not one of you bitch niggas is wantin' nun Cuz we stay chewin' out niggas like bubble gum Blastin' out punches like automatic guns Cookin you mothafuckas like burgers, well dun Merkin' you all, survivors there won't be one Cuz on this mic we stay merkin' niggas for fun Alrite people some honest comments would be much appreciated, holla back!!!!!
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Haters spend all they time hating on another's life
Then wonder why when presenting there's to others...no one looks twice Because at the end of the day, you get what you give So, when you consumed with his...don't get mad when everyone else is Last edited by Triple_N : 05-16-04 at 10:08 PM. |
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05-16-04, 10:17 PM | #2 | |||
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interesting collabo
#1...the chorus was good...but you can't use words like BUBBLE GUM in rap...lol dat sounds extremely gay um...This was well written on both parts Spul tried to use imagery, but fell short of painting vivid pictures like Triple N Triples imagery was more poignant and effective Both, however, were well done. Spul...you had nice references..yours was more of an open mic structure than Triples, whose structure is obvisously biased toward audio Rhyme wise..it's pretty nice overall, this is a 7.5/10 drop not great, but really good... 1 |
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05-19-04, 07:58 PM | #3 | |||||||
Ya mom massages my nuts
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Upppin for some comments
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Haters spend all they time hating on another's life
Then wonder why when presenting there's to others...no one looks twice Because at the end of the day, you get what you give So, when you consumed with his...don't get mad when everyone else is |
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05-20-04, 10:09 AM | #4 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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ok ok yea choruswas good except 4 the bubble gum part and the done burgers spul stop braggin about how ur so good 4 ur age im only 14 that dont mean shit dog ur either good or u aint ill give spuls verse a 6/10 and tripples ill give u a 7/10
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05-20-04, 10:11 AM | #5 | |||||
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it was a good collab but not the first i was feeling the chorus
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05-21-04, 07:11 PM | #6 | |||||||
Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: 3240 794D
Uppin for feedback
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Haters spend all they time hating on another's life
Then wonder why when presenting there's to others...no one looks twice Because at the end of the day, you get what you give So, when you consumed with his...don't get mad when everyone else is |
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05-21-04, 07:24 PM | #7 | |||||
STiLL Da FUKKiN SiCKEST!!
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triple u did ya thing dunn i dont know about da other dude lol...GON
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U NOT FUKKiN WiTH ME PLaiN N SiMP!... Da "SiCKEST ON DiS SiTE" LiNE HaS BEEN USED aGaiNST ME 50 x'S...U DUDES aBUSED iT |
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05-21-04, 09:00 PM | #8 | |||||||
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Now i can say for my self
that was some hot stuff you put down... i like that so keep keeping it real...i believe in you you believe in you the hell with those who hate....1
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06-02-04, 12:42 PM | #9 | |||||
(00)O=(00) <-- I will knock you the fuck out........
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i was feelin that it was some hott shyt keep it comin iight............................................. ......
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10-26-04, 09:45 PM | #10 | |||||
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nice job, Triple hit up my new open mic (in the sig)... a must peep beeotches, Fiya got a comeback... not bad u two, "bubble gum"= gangsta.. nice lol...
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10-26-04, 09:52 PM | #11 | ||||
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hey it wasn't jus him!!! and LOL why you reup this?
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10-26-04, 09:55 PM | #12 | |||||
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who reupped it.. lol... SPuL u just reupped it again, by responding, here i got reuppin' this, lol...
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10-26-04, 09:55 PM | #13 | |||||
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damn, you!!! why you do it?
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10-26-04, 09:58 PM | #14 | |||||
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i did not, do it, it already was upped by the person above me! stop gettin' mad at me..
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10-26-04, 10:08 PM | #15 | ||||
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the person above you posted in June. And damn, for last time, I ain't mad at you. lol
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