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02-03-04, 09:30 PM | #1 | |||||||
Str8 From CopKilla Queens
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IP: 4577 CD9A
bleh, hope it doesnt waste too much of your time, just felt like throwing words together
picture a world without the need for conformity niggas not boring wholes in hoes and peace is the normalcy written speach is authored orally personally i feel every person is weak we're all culprits of disloyalty royally disperse words from earth to mercury trust the trekking of a star spangling trekky liquor me wrecking me like lex luthor i stunt on supermen preaching complexity wonder why my tongue two steps to the beat of a ballin buzz im too tall to be small my heart huge cause i've fallen in love sorry it produced the thought process of a schizophrenic it was apallingly misleading failing thoughts i hope theres no apology needed 1luv. |
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02-08-04, 01:58 PM | #2 | |||||||
Str8 From CopKilla Queens
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IP: 4577 CD9A
umm, i was hoping for a reply so i'll up this, 1luv.
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02-08-04, 04:18 PM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: 4577 CD9A
it was very confusing... it didnt seem to be having a destination.. meaning it sounds
tight when you say it real fast but what are you trying to get at? at first it was sounding good... but then as it went on it was mushed together without making any real sense... help me to understand
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02-08-04, 04:30 PM | #4 | |||||||
Str8 From CopKilla Queens
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IP: 4577 CD9A
^Umm im on some Aesop shit, just spitting with a vague path, try to take the words as they are and dont look for a deep meanig, be vague, 1luv.
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02-10-04, 01:04 PM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: 4427 B15C
when i started reading this i thought i had the idea of where you were going to take it, but that i was wrong. and really im not sure where you did take it, i have so many different thoughts now going throu my head from those few lines that really its crazy. it mentions alot of different topics, but all relates somehow. although there isnt really a point or a message it seems to this piece, it flows well and sounds good. your vocab was awsome also. the whole piece reminds me of abstract somehow.
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02-13-04, 09:06 PM | #6 | |||||||
Str8 From CopKilla Queens
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IP: 6236 079F
^Thanks ma, still looking for replies, elevation is key, 1luv.
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