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02-16-04, 01:53 AM | #1 | |||||||
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Wats goin thru my mind!?
IP: 56C2 E0DF
I kept it easy on my first few posts
ya comments made me chuckle had me feelin like i was against the ropes no where to run back to da turnbuckle i type this shit wit da hope that it will turn sum heads not make enemies but just make friends which is good for u cuz my enemies usually turn up dead face bloated lookin like a turnip, red i hold down hella mics im like an emcee wit three arms in cyphers ur just happy to be there like a immigrant who just got his greencard i must confess im lookin to battle RB's best i want that crown i want the throne imma take u down like a forsale sign on a house just sold so if u think your competition come at me wit ya best written composition or imma use u as a toilet and throw out the pot that i used to piss in make u my personal outhouse, my personal urinal whipe my ass wit ya eyebrows str8 up murder u cuz thas juts wat i do i got much to prove and believe me ni99a not much to lose |
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02-16-04, 02:14 AM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 152C 56ED
ok well you didn't say anything that hasn't been said before by somebody else (and better)
but otherwise your structure was ok and the vocab decent... tended to lose the rhyme in a couple spots like the whole last part.... make u my personal outhouse, my personal urinal whipe my ass wit ya eyebrows str8 up murder u cuz thas juts wat i do i got much to prove and believe me ni99a not much to lose ^weak finish man, sorry think outside the box and you will go far on this site.... {Peace} |
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02-16-04, 02:18 AM | #3 | |||||||
New to RB
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IP: 56C2 E0DF
yea no doubt i tend to get a lil lazy at times
come battle time ill step it up thats another thing how i get a battle poppin? |
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