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07-25-05, 01:51 PM
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a.k.a prozak
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The Best Since Sean Carter
IP: 865C 284C
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/straightaim_music.htm
Dont Tell Me Nuthin bout the quality cuz i know it aint the best but im poor and i aint gon get a new one till i think im elevated enough..so if u mind can ya'll please give me feed bout the rest of it...and i know the speech in the beggining doesnt have shit ta do wit the subjects but it was a dope intro so i had ta put it in and its me spitting on here besides jay-z's verse...im done wit mixes... here's my links http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=200738 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=201065 |
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07-25-05, 02:32 PM
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L.E
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IP: 03A1 A28A
Listening...
I've heard this beat before...Jay-Z..? A'ight...but onto your verse...like I told you on AIM, you sound exactly like that guy I told you about...But anyway...yes...your quality is HORRIBLE. It sounds like you have drule runnning out of your mouth as you spit, and you have snot coming out your ears...it's that bad. What kind of mic are you using..? Anyway...onto other things...your flow is off...horibbly...and it sounds like you just spitting as fast as you can to get all the information out...I had this problem before too. Dont make your lines as long. It somewhat rides the beat, but I really couldn't tell because of your quality. You also need to work on lyrics...like I could barely understand you...something about Sean Carter..? But anyway...you really need to work on everything...No hate or anything...but just keep elevating... |
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