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Old 11-19-04, 07:30 PM   #1
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Limited Edition and 20 GraND Collabo "RoLL'N WiF THuGs"

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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/20grand.htm
check it out its pretty damn hot!

Limited Edition Spits first
20 GraND Spits 2nd and does chorus




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Old 11-19-04, 07:48 PM   #2
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Told me to peep it so i did its pretty hot....20 came a lil better tho...pzz ~1~
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Old 11-20-04, 02:03 AM   #3
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Listening*

Not really feeling the beat too much. Limited.....seems like you got some emotion in your lyrics, but your vocals were a little too low. Flow wasn't bad, but at times it sounded like you were just talking into the mic instead of actually rapping. 20 had a little better quality.....his vocals were a little clearer. But his lyrics were a little basic in this one. Flow was cool, but I'm not a big fan of this style of rap.....not really sure what style it is, but I hear it all over now.....lol. Keep dropping
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Old 11-20-04, 11:37 AM   #4
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ya this is a lil differnt style and beat that i normally use.
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Old 11-21-04, 02:59 PM   #5
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Werd...uppin' for some feed...this wasnt my kind of song haha...
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Old 11-21-04, 05:53 PM   #6
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lol......... *listens*


i can tell this isnt ur guys persona of life.. but its a fun song im taking it..


first verse: flow at the beggining was aight... but then it fell off.. lyrics were iight.. keep workin on it tho.. not to bad.. but needs some elevating..


chorus: Wasent as clear as a chorus should be.. but its was strait..

second verse: flow was good.. but wasent sayin shit for real.. to simple.. not much wit.. with a slow flow u gotta be witty..

quality: 2nd verses was decent quality.. first was ass lol..

all in all.. ehh wasent really feelin this track.. to me it was around a 5/10..
but, everyones here to elevate.. word.. -1
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Old 11-21-04, 09:48 PM   #7
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it was aight....... how come ive heard this beat before???? or i think i have...... it was ok, LE has improved but theres still alotta trouble wit ur quality (which we cant blame u much for) and with ur flow alil bit.... u fell off at one part

20 i think was better because his flow and quality was better.... even tho LE is the better writer, i think by far, his presence and delivery is better... simplistic writin (like some other people sed) but effective enough on this type of track..... ok track, but i dont think yall fit the title that well....... fun track, didnt hurt my ears or anythin.. haha jk..... aight drop some feedback in my shit.... dont go the link wit me "like toy soldiers" is wat its called
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