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07-07-04, 12:33 AM | #1 | |||||||
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what happend
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when did rap turn into sylables and writen structure.
what happend to spiten a flow and haven you skilz ruptured... ... in one verse it like giving them your worst leaven them with a curse lyinf montinless in a herse what happend to just tha flow of ya rhymes since when has it been about the way you spell the dyms or any word at, n that it about rhythme listen to tha dj kick it it should be about emcee and the way they lick it or the way that lik others with out trouble and all they do is spit to burst anothers buble when has it been left to 12-16 sylable. it should be about if you compations killable people shoudn't be about typeing flow alone but spit rhyme with many on ya micorphone screw tha way you type it but the way you spit it and you get you dj to sit there and hit it and leave to no others just spit wit you borthers
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07-07-04, 06:25 PM | #2 | |||||||
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upping for feed back
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07-07-04, 09:23 PM | #3 | ||||||
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Hmmm...Im a newbie I know, so take this for what its worth, but I can tell you I 'preciate the message, but the rhymes were typical and I didn't catch any tight punchlines.
Peep mine if you wanna: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133812 |
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