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01-03-05, 08:20 PM | #1 | |||||||
Is F'in Bored
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ahead of my time (the paradox)
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Sometimes i feel i'm the greatest i'm ahead of my time
and instead of just rhyme i can fly ahead of my lines fore' imbedded by fine graphite and lead at a time they'll be led out of time through my mind and sped up to find they're ahead of the mind that made them but ahead in my time they haven't been made yet because i've sped up my mind then i led all the lines forward and ahead of my time i'm ahead of my time though so i'm ahead of my lines so they're propelled ahead of me and we constantly pick up speed faster and faster and faster don't stop or slow down or crash or flo off or often flo faster it often causes disaster cause and effect is relapse or relapse of a time collapse so perhaps it's my mind perhaps, but if that's so all the lines are timed in my mind so where do the timelines go and since my mind is so explosive where do the timelines blow and if my mind don't ever stop then where do the timelines go since every road leads to a thick brick wall and a slick slick fall then essentially a paradox is an oxymoron but indispensible to my poetical thought process so i'm fighting a losing battle but i've not lost yet
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02-19-05, 12:34 AM | #2 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: A3EA 639E
it'z good in sum parts of it but u need 2 betta structure ur flow & don't stretch ur lines
but othawise it was overall pretty decent material |
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02-19-05, 02:46 PM | #3 | |||||
You Cant Handle The Truth
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IP: 07B8 11FF
generally I'd say "he from da Souf' he don't know shit" but
he's correctamundo buddy ...you got some kewl multies but ya lines are stretched certain spots, gotta cut 'em down some...you can say what ya tryina say with less words, just gotta think about it more...keep it up tho... |
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