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02-18-05, 08:30 PM | #1 | ||||||
-Not On My Level-
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In Love With You...
IP: CD8C A356
In Love With You I been thinking and I got something to tell you baby There is something I am starting to feel between you and me It's like without you a vital part of me is missing Or is it really you who I am missing I remember all of the good times, including the kissing You dont have to tell me, I already know you miss me I already know you cant take two steps without thinking about me Well I cant take one minute without remembering you It was like a way of life, me and you The way we were, thought we would last forever I guess forever is short these days,now I am without you forever Now I just wish to ask what I have wanted to ask you Why did you leave me when I told you I was in love with you? |
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02-18-05, 08:31 PM | #2 | ||||||
-Not On My Level-
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IP: CD8C A356
uppin for positive feedback......
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02-19-05, 02:56 PM | #3 | ||||||
-Not On My Level-
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IP: 6618 2DB7
uppin..........................
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02-20-05, 01:10 AM | #4 | ||||
Back....
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IP: 02A1 5DEF
I don't think you put much efort in this drop. I mean it can be way better and expressing love should have super poems. nah mean?
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02-22-05, 03:53 PM | #5 | ||||||
-Not On My Level-
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IP: 596C 2677
uppin/////////////////
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02-23-05, 10:58 AM | #6 | ||||||
-Not On My Level-
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IP: 596C 2677
uppin/////////////////////
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02-23-05, 11:04 AM | #7 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 596C 2677
I didn't really like this one but it was aight.
Last edited by surgical : 02-23-05 at 11:08 AM. |
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03-06-05, 06:57 AM | #8 | ||||
Odi et Amo
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IP: 3A91 89A1
I love this drop: it's packed with such pure emotion and I love the concept of it, especially those 2 last lines with the question you ask. You found a good balance with your vocab, structure made it easy to read and I just liked how your story progressed. Good drop!
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03-06-05, 06:26 PM | #9 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 8A1A D0A3
honestly, i really liked it
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03-19-05, 03:49 PM | #10 | ||||||
-Not On My Level-
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IP: AB07 3993
uppinn/////////////////////////////////////////////
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03-24-05, 09:31 AM | #11 | ||||||
-Not On My Level-
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IP: 596C 2677
uppin.....................
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