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metafo' vs mizz fyre
IP: 5E3D 6FD7
Battle Rules:
topic- abandoned 16 - 30 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-26-05 at 01:19 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. Expired battle close - win |
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IP: 0368 028A
mizz fyre has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-05 07:11 AM.
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IP: B1F9 8A99
MeTaFo' has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-05 07:45 AM.
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IP: 6245 FF44
Dear son
I’m sorry I left you at this vulnerable time, always knew I just wouldn’t cope The doctors telling me, that you’d never regain your senses, there’s no hope I couldn’t handle seeing my little boy going through his life so tormented You had such an imagination, no limit to the stories that you invented Your eyes used to sparkle but after the accident you lost your personality Losing my mentality, you were to young to become the victim of a fatality I know you want me to come back, but I can’t, the real me, I’m seeking Hope they can get in touch with me, when you finally start speaking Dear mother I said my first words since the accident, with all my thoughts compiled I smiled, looked them in the eye and uttered “I’m such a lonely child” My mother abandoned me and left me to deal with life’s hard trial In disbelief when I was born, but tell me ma’, are you still in denial? How can you justify leaving me, when it was only you that I needed Sneaking out in the night, no second thoughts, you just proceeded What was it ma’? did I ruin your reputation being so far from the “norm” How can it be that selfishness is the only emotion you’re able to perform Dear son I got your letter, you sound bitter, but you know I don’t deserve the blame Such a shame, that after the accident I had no control over what became I had to leave, gather my thoughts, give you some space and make a break To be honest son, the truth is, giving birth to you was a terrible mistake I’m glad your finally talking again son, its good that we keep in touch Hope you can get on with your life now and don’t think of me too much Dear mother A MISTAKE!!!, you said you wanted me to be a part of your world Is that why, you don’t care about me, into my own life I was hurled I dreamt about you last night ma’, I kept seeing us in different places Now today there’s so many holes in my heart, I can’t fill the spaces I’ve realised what I need to do, I hear the skies, me their calling Goodbye ma’, I think its kicking in now, I feel like I’m falling Dear son I haven’t heard from you in a while, your last letter, I can’t recall Tell me son, is it that you’ve taken your life, did you really end it all………
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E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: 4F2F CBA3
The 3 steps to abondment...Take a stroll with me yo
![]() ....''I thought you had my back?''.... Its a calm night, Little did i know i was getting into a fight There was my crew, and about 16 enemies lookin on in fright they pulled out knives i really couldnt believe my eyes I guess thats when my boys ran 'cause they realized my foes planned a suprize attack, I was flat out on my back Next thing i knew i woke in a hospital bed with limbs not in tact Its a fact, I was abondoned an not even one visit after i took the beatin Then they had the nerve too actually send me a get well greetin! So i replied, anger in my eyes...They knew deep down they did wrong But Then again it turns out...My friends set me up all along! ....''A Lost Soul''.... February 1st, 1989...They cut the cord and it was time.... For me too shine, or so I was led too believe.... But it was just the beginning of a mother abondening her seed Usually people switch babies at birth, but i was born with a curse The woman who put me on this earth, is nowhere to be found Wrapped in a blanket...she didnt care where she layed me down as lons as she was rid of a helpless child that she left out in the wild I just prey to god she isnt out there now with a smile I hope she regrets what she did, and crys herself to sleep 'Cause death is what she deserves for bein so weak! ....''Love Is__''.... I was taught.....Love is suppose to be a good feeling... suppose to wake you up in the morning and reach for the ceiling Keeps you alive, keeps you tickin' thru these hard times... Then i lost my first battle....and So I abondend my rhymes Thought the ink had ran dry, And my brain seemed to be tired Then too top it all...My boss called me an said i was Fired Life was at an all time low, I never thought i'd keep my head up No more sketchin with a pencil, I retired and hung the Led up I was told i could make it, I was given nothin but propps... Its funny how failure on one minor occassion can make love stop.
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E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: 4F2F CBA3
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IP: DDC2 E04A
^^^nice verse......uppin ya'll....................
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IP: 8E5E 43CE
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IP: 3CC3 5ED7
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Torching You All
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This was feedback posted for mizz fyre
IP: 0825 899A
Checking This Out Being Mizz Is In The Council As Well Good Shit Girl.
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Need Feed
Lord, Forgive Me Ft Sabotage Something Like That-Ft Torch Summer Nights-Ft Troch Super G's Ft Oreo The Council
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E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: 7683 9F32
Who's Torch?.....
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IP: 3CC3 5ED7
^^^lol i have no clue.....but thanx for the feed.......uppin ya'll
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IP: 5BFF A1A4
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...Closer Look...
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This was feedback posted for mizz fyre
IP: E174 E9AD
pollssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss sssssssssssssssss....
nice drops to both...
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A Life Of Chryme
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This was feedback posted for mizz fyre
IP: 0825 899A
both were mad good......very close at that........
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