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Old 12-21-05, 03:40 PM   #1
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Intermental feat. Pree - They Dont Hear Me (WOOO BANGER)

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Old 12-21-05, 03:54 PM   #2
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aight


beats nice

woop to that first dude hook

and his verse now

deliverys dope

flows dope

emotions good

ROFL@Couldnt Get Head If THey Flipped a coin


hook again


inter

deliverys nice

flows dope

rofl@family income

presence is nice

hook again


good track ima bump this on my mp3 word

overall:8.8/10
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Old 12-21-05, 03:55 PM   #3
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thanks fam.............
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Old 12-21-05, 04:07 PM   #4
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wassup with the muffled sound to the vocals and the beat?

hmmmm


1st cat...vocals low...iono man...sounds far away from my headphones

flow is good tho...rhyme scheme a tad predictable at worst, consistent at best


Inter...take the lows out ur vocals...same thing in every track dawg...startin to sound like a broken record here

"even if u were Jesus, u couldn't even cross me"...sacrilegious, but good line.


not a bad track...just lacked direction and good EQ'ing


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Old 12-21-05, 04:33 PM   #5
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Old 12-21-05, 07:00 PM   #6
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dont really like the beat, love the hook, quality is cool, flow is cool, nice lyrics, lyrics are a bit low but still good, mmm inters verse, didnt like the begining, but fiou i taught it was like this all the way, i like this quality and flow, nice lyrics, even if you were jesus, you couldnt even cross me, something like that, but it was ill haha weerd ,nice track, not your best inter but still good
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Old 12-21-05, 07:02 PM   #7
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thanks fam..................
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Old 12-21-05, 07:16 PM   #8
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ok

not my type of beat

your right bout banger tho

intro is kool or is dat the hook?? decent anywayz

first verse kool lyrics are kool flow deliver n emotion are on point overall strong verse

ok hook... cathcy its decent likein it,

2nd verse. ok delivery aint that good for this type of track u need to be proper hyped up for this type of track

flow is on point though lyrics are kool overall pretty nice verse got better as it went along

hook nicee...

overall pretty decent song the first guy defo had the stronger verse though not bad overall.. pz
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Old 12-21-05, 07:17 PM   #9
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Old 12-21-05, 09:47 PM   #10
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um well....the one cat you were workin wit on this is hella dope, I like his voice and style. good delivery and flow..let him know I said he's dope aight. and for you intermental....your gettin better first download from me, thats how dope you did. lyrics are hot and as well is the flow, delivery is good. adlibs are too loud. but overall this is a dope collabo.

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Old 12-22-05, 06:22 AM   #11
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word thanks alot fam..........
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Old 12-22-05, 12:29 PM   #12
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okay...........

beat is dope

hook is dope like chicken little....lmao

first guy: ur voice is kl, flow on point, nothing special

inter:i aint still feeling ur voice but u r elavating, flow is kl...

pretty dope track

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Old 12-22-05, 03:45 PM   #13
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chicken litte???? wtf...thanks upp
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Old 12-25-05, 03:48 PM   #14
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OH NOOOO
I HATE THIS SOUTHERN TYPE SHIT!
EWWWW
Ok, 1st verse
dude is nice
sushi bar line nice but played
get some head/ flip the coin line was nice
liked the tyra banks and naomi cambell line
and i like the desperate /sex in the city line too
dude verse is nice as hell
ok, now Im feelin the beat more
im akon but ikm not lonely
yeah
I liked dude verse alot
it was nice
2nd verse
lol, for some reason
it seems like you're tryin to sound like a younger version of young jeezy
ya girl aint "thir-thee" I think you meant thirsty son
It sounds like you're whisperin
i dont know why, but it always sound like you'rw whisperin on ya track
but i like ya voice though, you
ll sound awesome dude, on hooks.
but yo, ya boy Pree stood out like a mothafucka with his verse
his shit was dope
you should've came with more punchlines, and got a little bit more amp'd
but yeah, hit me up on the collab, so you can spit a hook for me
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Old 12-25-05, 03:50 PM   #15
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word thanks.......pree came good fo sho
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