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01-19-04, 03:09 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Drugz nd Liqour
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Like Tyrets Syndrone victims i 'spit shit' at every chance,
My mouth released profanities sit and watch as i advance, At a glance, this rap game for sucess and higher finance, Money got me actin funny, heads spinning like a break dance, Round and round, pop an asprin, paracetamol and pills, The shit begins, under my skin, tylynol and fluid spills, My friend died or was he killed? i couldn't get the carpet clean, Put the whole thing in quick cycle, broke the wash machine, I think i've lost my spleen, if you've seen it please return it, Lost a bag of 'green' so i rolled up the grass and burnt it, When its lit, i take my hit, hissy fit upon the floor, Drove a car without a permit sped to the club and killed a whore, Another hit, shit; I don't remember anymore? Is that the paranoia kicking in? is that the pow..lice at my door? Is someone trying to kill me? do they know i did some more? Drugs and liqour got me off quicker than any man at a flicker Down a pint of hennesey and i end up feeling sicker Then a vicar with one leg sitting in a room full of muslims Fuck this shit, I'm off to bed, to sleep before the floor spins. |
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01-19-04, 03:31 PM | #2 | ||||
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...My favorite "female Emcee"..with another dope piece..you amaze me with your wordplay...
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01-19-04, 03:35 PM | #3 | ||||||
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wow, am i seriously your favourite female emcee? seriously? wow, that suprises me..and you like my wordplay! jesus..you must be after something! LMAO
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01-19-04, 03:36 PM | #4 | ||||||
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wow..... impressive
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01-19-04, 03:37 PM | #5 | ||||||
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k i gotta give you props... I never heard a girl spit like that... you drop any audio... I'd like to hear it
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01-19-04, 03:39 PM | #6 | |||||
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01-19-04, 05:18 PM | #7 | ||||
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^lol...but yeah this was a nice piece here...you had good structure in this.....the flow was good through out it i thought, it stayed on pretty well in this, flowed good....you had some good vocab....good wordplay like stated before me....had some nice lines in there....overall a nice piece....keep at it.
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01-20-04, 01:51 PM | #8 | ||||||
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thank y'all so much..for once in my life i can feel proud..and to Penskills...we haven't even had a first date! LMAO..
think i could be a legend one day? |
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