10 linez (5 barz)

Go Ahead N Check In N Spit.....

Are UGunna Check In Or Wha Kid

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Pale Horse Checkin in gimme a min. at work put up in 2 sec-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

/You masturbate when the Dr makes you turn your head and cough/
/But in this Battle you come up short like a midget with his legs chopped off/
/Just for diss'n youll wind up on the back of the milk carton missin/
/So Ill chop off your ear and yell in it just so you can listen/
/leave you in the fetal position and dont stop cause Im a fanatick/
/I'll leave you gasping for air like a choking asthmatic/
/I had it, Im sick of battlin this fagot that cant hack it/
/Dont worry though you'll get another shot in da Losers bracket/
/I can torture you all day and laugh at you pain just to hear you shout/
/But instead I'll kick your but so hard that crap comes outcha mouth/

Just Seen Droppin Wen Im Dun

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Just take it easy on the newby mister 42-7--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Brooklyn Holla Back

Pale Is Like A Crack In The Sidewalk Cuz He Is Walking A Thin Line
Ill Shatter His Skull So He Can Voluntarily Release His Mind
My Bars Are Hit Hard Like They Was A Metal Erection
Quit Battling And Start Writing In The Poems Section
Pale Is Like Pilots In Training He Still Cant Land A Punch
He Prolly Tries To Bite So Much Verses Appear To Him As Crunch (Candy)
.:.:FuN fLoW tYmE:.:.
Ill Smash Your Verse In Thousands Of Pieces You Can Label Them As Reeses
Pale Couldnt Spell Win If He Had A Thesis My Loses Stay With You Like Diseases

.:Welcome To The Lost Column:.

~Won~

Was Fun....

It was fun
but I dont know
I might have you on this
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Good shit from both. Envy came with some bette wordplay however.
Vote-Envy

It was close however....

Peep my battle with Born to Kill

This was actually kinda close...

Some good lines from the newb, but some of them were mad played. (all midget lines are pretty much played/so are most asthma lines)

Better wordplay, kinda mild hits, but overall nicer originality and better flow from Envy...nice use of multi's as well...

Holla back...
Born vs. Cryptic

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Envy why newbs?


That new cat lacked vocab and complexity, envy had some iite punches, ....not a hot battle, ...little one sided...but envy took this on, wit a better overall verse....vote=Envy Ny

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Fuck you

Envy Took This One.He Could Have Done Better But Pale Came With Nothin But Weak Lines

Vote-Envy NY

i dont need to say shit else