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missfiyagurl | 0 | 0% | |
Triple_N | 5 | 100.00% | |
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04-16-04, 04:00 PM | #1 | |
Ya mom massages my nuts
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missfiyagurl vs Triple_N
IP: 3240 794D
Ah'ight here the rules
no d/r votes 10-20 lines u drop first
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04-16-04, 04:11 PM | #2 | |
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listen up
IP: 63F3 DE49
On the contrary negro y blanco
Ya real stupid ya stuck like Velcro Say ya got them glots, gun shots Hittin’ my block, but ya stopped Why? Cuz I landed wit’ them 47 A-Ks Ya ran scared cuz they all in ya face While ya knockin’ on wood, I’m just Pickin’ pace u wish ya could, nigga rest He rockin’ the NIKE’s cuz this nigga got AIR He keep stoppin’ ta breathe, we’d tell ya if we cared His self-esteem is blown, he ate by this lil gurl Fiya took it home, he still down on the swirl Now he think he nuts, catch this lunatic Ain’t a nigga but I cut, thrown measures ‘be legitimate Ya tossin’ pennies while I’m droppin’ dimes Ooh he can get me, but I beat his ass half blind Aint seein wut u do but I’m well prepared He actin’ hype tryna pretend my image aint there They came back please call my third exorcist Stutter n spit ur words wit’ that lame ass lisp…
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04-16-04, 04:39 PM | #3 | |
Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: 3240 794D
I'm a get charged for arson for blazin' up this squirl
She runnin' da street on fire, now she's literally "missfiyagurl" U dreamin' if u think gon' win, cuz I'm a real solider My bitchslap will wake ya ass up faster than "folgers" So, let me give your sorry ass some tips My sound's platinum, yours is similar to when a CD skips The rap genre is not for u shawtie, your a crock You should dropout of rap, an attend the "school of rock" I eat bitch emcees like you at lunch time Cuz my shit hit so hard I literally "punch lines" Your nothin' compared to me bitch, u jus shitty ya rhymes still wouldn't be hot if u hold dem under ya tittie I think that should do it, one
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04-16-04, 05:03 PM | #4 | |
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IP: 4C8F 0F5D
Missfiyagurl' ...! - Need To Work On Your Structure' .. Your Lines Feel A Bit Short Witch Threw Your Flow Off Balance' .. But I Was Feeling Your Verse!!' .... Just Need To Work On WordPlay & Vocab.... Plus Structure!!
Triple_N Got This Shit' ... !! By A Bit!! lol.... I'm a get charged for arson for blazin' up this squirl She runnin' da street on fire, now she's literally "missfiyagurl" ^Alright Opener!! 8/10 Your nothin' compared to me bitch, u jus shitty ya rhymes still wouldn't be hot if u hold dem under ya tittie ^Lol' ... Alright Closer!! 9/10
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04-16-04, 05:46 PM | #5 |
Flyweight
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IP: D24C B335
missyyagirl, or whatever your name is...YOU SUCK!!! nah im just playin. u gotta make sure the raps makhat they rhyme. i can see u tryin tho. triple N was kinda wac but he did good enough to win.
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04-16-04, 06:27 PM | #6 | |
Suspended: Biting
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IP: E3CA 7CA2
Triple N..... Is A Bitch......
Y U Battling Girls.... |
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04-16-04, 08:22 PM | #7 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 3085 0272
Man its a fuckin' battle, who else is she gonna battle? The majority is guys. It's good practice for her, Triple N is battling her because no other cats won't. Shit dawg.
Anyways: missfiyagurl - Your structure was not as solid, but your wordplay I thought was good. Need some more personly's and multi's in there. Your flow wasn't as good as Triple N's, but you had an idea going. Best Line: "Now he think he nuts, catch this lunatic Ain’t a nigga but I cut, thrown measures ‘be legitimate" Nice line. Your ending could of been stronger also. Triple N- Good structure and you have the tendecy to open up very powerful, always a check. You had nice Peronly's in there too and I was feelin' all of ya punches. Best Line: "So, let me give your sorry ass some tips My sound's platinum, yours is similar to when a CD skips" You ended humorous and good. Vote: Triple N way to step up girl and battle good challengers, it only hepls ya.
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04-16-04, 09:07 PM | #8 |
Flyweight
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IP: EC0B 84C7
Misfiya gurl u need really work on your verses for real but good shit u hanging in
there just try to come a bit harder and to use less wording on wat u trying to spit but keep it up.. as for triple n u had a good pener and ender it was aight but battlin a girl?? dam never do that shit again next time u battle ur givin the other person more ideas about punchlines an shit...bt yeah my vote goes to Triplle-n |
04-16-04, 11:23 PM | #9 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: AAF4 20CB
right now breakdown for missfiyagurl:
punches 6/10 rymes 6/10 style 7/10 not bad not bad but u need some work thats all keep workin ull get this shyt breakdown for triple n: punches 8/10 ryhmes 8/10 style 7/10 u won this theres no debate u kept is short and sweet this was ur best line: Your nothin' compared to me bitch, u jus shitty ya rhymes still wouldn't be hot if u hold dem under ya tittie that was fucking sweet u got my vote |
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04-17-04, 12:54 AM | #10 |
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: BF56 CF93
missigirl u suck ass
3 took structure flow vocab personal punches miss wotk on vocab personals structuire and flow ur verse coul;d have been really good 3 i was feelin ur verse work on vocab and personals vote 3
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