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06-30-05, 09:30 PM | #1 | |||||||
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heven gates
IP: BFFF 41EC
this lifes kinda sad, the way it gets you down and it's kinda hard when people die and arn't around but our souls stay together something that'll last forever we'll all go someplace where we'll know it's better Trying to get past this pain again, left on my own afraid I try to do my best on earth but all i get is the rain live your life to the very best that you can instead of running away from it try and be the man I gave it my best shot, now im running away from it all to much pressure made me fall I don't want to have to crawl but thats the way life treated me constantly felt it was beating me where has all the respect gone can't you see that your weakning me so what should i do now just try and live this life or should i cut myself and die with using this knife would anybody feel pain and even feel sorrow am I going to live this life another day tomorrow I keep on questioning myself, this is bad for my heath I wish everyone could enjoy life and have the wealth but we all know that life can be so unfair it's like we're living in a world that doesn't even care whats happened to the human race it's a damn disgrace everything seems such a waste and im always seeing an angry face arrogant people with wrong opinions, angry youths stickin middle fingers yea. thats the world we live in, full of hate and our parents who bring us lost abuse tormented souls, our violent minds then lose control left at home feeling trapped from the world and living in a dark hole |
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06-30-05, 09:43 PM | #3 | |||||||
dope
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IP: BFFF 41EC
thanks................................
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06-30-05, 09:51 PM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: 6422 86F8
Definte Some Deep Ass Shit Like A Fuckin Emotional Roller Coaster 9/10
Rtf ~1ne~ |
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06-30-05, 10:08 PM | #5 | |||||||
dope
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IP: BFFF 41EC
drop a link messenger and i'll drop some feed back. Thanks for love so far. keep posting feedback..
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06-30-05, 10:39 PM | #7 | ||||
Witness, 4 God, 4-Ever
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IP: 2AC9 607D
i liked this man, emotion was the best aspect i saw, good flow and vocab was pretty good also, overall nice drop, RTF sometime on one of my om's, keep it up man
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06-30-05, 10:53 PM | #8 | |||||
Light Weight
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IP: 577F F1C2
Good use of imagery and emotions evoked on this piece, keep em comin--peace
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07-01-05, 03:11 PM | #9 | |||||||
dope
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IP: BFFF 41EC
upping for more...................
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