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Old 04-17-03, 11:56 PM   #1
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Wink Fuck me good

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I want you badly/
I want to fuck you madly/
I want your dick in me hardcore/
so far it makes me sore/
My pussy is an ocean/
Your dick be a boat/
Common' aboard/
An' we'll make is all float/
We'll drift on da water/
We'll wave in da breeze/
So come take me now/
And do as chu please/
So ride it/
fuck me good/
You know the way you should/
Lick me inside from hole to clit/
And I will try and please you back/
From the shaft all the way to the sack/
Shit give me one more chance/
We can get together and have a little naked dance/
Forget the fat lady/
Forget all da singin'/
Cuz it ain't ovah/
Till I iz screamin'/
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Old 04-18-03, 01:52 AM   #2
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.....i could write,but im too tired...
ill let the other cats speak...
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Old 04-18-03, 03:13 AM   #3
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wow, ok...seems like you like to fuck. cool i guess. not to bad. make ya barz a lil longer and i think youd be good
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Old 04-18-03, 03:53 AM   #4
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i loved this ryhme for obvious reasons, u get upsfrom me, and mini me, u wanna collab?
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Old 04-18-03, 08:19 AM   #5
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MY EYES, MY EYES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Constructive Piece.........
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Old 04-18-03, 09:43 AM   #6
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haha yeah enjoyed that, yo, good to see a chick come out and say it straight up hah, got me thinkin...and toey haha...

Peace Out Yo!!!
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Old 04-18-03, 09:50 AM   #7
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lol i just red it. still laughing when im typing this not laughing at you. but that was tyte. lol keep up the good work.laters
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Old 02-21-04, 02:09 AM   #8
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yo that was ill. especially for a chick. i hope more females come out and flow as good as you. very very dope. i like it.
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Old 02-21-04, 10:30 AM   #9
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nice

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That was very interesting, I see that the song really goes with your name,

-We'll drift on da water/
We'll wave in da breeze/
So come take me now/
And do as chu please/
So ride it/
fuck me good/
You know the way you should-

I especially likw this part of your spit, it sounds really good, overall this rap is good, but I know you can improve on making your bars a lil longer like unfadeable said, other than that good job.
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Old 02-21-04, 01:56 PM   #10
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i hope u die.. this needs to be disinfected, and burned, and put somewhere were no one can ever read this again..
DIE mother fucker DIE
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Old 02-21-04, 03:52 PM   #11
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u really need to work on ur vocab
ok peice
keep droppin
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Old 02-21-04, 07:44 PM   #12
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That style's ill your visuals skills
My props for the you dropped
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