rules:
U SPIT FIRST
10-15 LINES
NO D/R
NO HATE
NO CREW VOTES
NO BITING
NO FEEDING
NO BITCHING
NO FREEPOSTING

SPIT A.S.A.P

yo


if i shot you tommorow you'd still DIE TODAY/

i'll serve you like burger king- you can have it YOUR WAY

but in the battle of the WITS your SPITS couldn't CONVINCE

the SHIT you WRIT was SICK --even if you SPIT BRICKS with CHICKS sucken ther own DICKS--for KICKS

how IS IT you think your XPLICIT/ i'll leave you TWICHIN __WISHIN someone would VISIT-

your LIFELESS MOLD- while it LIES THERE COLD

LINED WITH HOLES/ EYES EXPOSED to the LIES YOU TOLD

its a murderrap other RHYMES UNTOLD/ i'll tear out your cortex to show the world the ryhmes I HOLD


W?E you wanted ma verse now so this is what you get
stupidness

When I’m reading your lines I thought no one could get any worse…
You made me look twice…cause I couldn’t believe that was ur verse…
You haven’t yet won a battle…what makes you think you can merk me?
Did you even have punches??…cause if u did they didn’t hurt me…
You changed to a new style…do u actually think this one is ILL??…
You got no wins man…and u never can and a definite never will…
Why is your name 1-liner?…you couldn’t even beat me with a hundred…
Change it to WACKliner…are you retarded?…sorry I jus wondered…
Im murdering you and anyone else who dares too…Your life?…erased…
Rules say 10-15…I can beat u wit 10, now wit 5 losses…that’s a disgrace…

uppin>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>.>>

i guess we get no luv
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opening - xplicit
punches - both
flow - xplicit
creativity - both
personals - xplicit
metas - 1liner
complexity - xplicit
enjoyment - xplicit
overall - if i could vote my vote would go to xplicit. no hate 1liner, i just thought his was better.

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1liner was completely merked in this battle.....all categories go to explicit......1liner..how the fuck you going to come tell me I'm wack as hell when you're fuckn 0-5 and about to be 0-6? props to you explicit..sick verse.....1liner..you suck dick

1liner - yo man...ya structure n flow needs more consistency. also, unless the hits have sum kind of relevance to each other people r going to keep merkin ya.

ex:
i'll leave you TWICHIN __WISHIN someone would VISIT- this was a great line but what does it have to do wit:
its a murderrap other RHYMES UNTOLD

keep elevatin

explicit - not too much heat but flow, structure, n everything else was nice

the u couldn't beat me wit a 100 was a nice personal.

if i could vote it'd be explicit

What up with all these nigga's having the same name as me.

this a was really close battle..not a good one..but close

i give it to 1liner because of his punches..and style..Xplicit no hate but ur shit was tooooo original. u need to work a bit on your structure and stop putting.... period....in.....between....ur....words

PZ

opener:xplicit
closer:Tie
wordplay:Tie
structure:Tie
punches:xplicit
overall:xplicit

xplicit took this one with harder hitting punches, 1liner ur structure changes in nearly every battle, an u gon get banned soon for havin too many battles open.



plz vote honestly on the battle in my sig!!!!

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opener:xplicit
closer:xplicit
wordplay:Tie
structure:xplicit
punches:xplicit
mutlies: 1liner
personals: xplicit
enjoyment: xplicit
overall:xplicit

actually this was one sided, but it was a gd battle

peace

x got dis 1 on flow punches n personals gd verse man... hit dis up plz http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92528 ......thx........................pz

Xplicit~Lyrics took this easily due to better punches, flow, personals, wordplay, and flow. It's nice to see 1Liner elevatin tho.

vote= XPLICIT~LYRICS

X won, everything
easily
but X, hered advice:

you got potential. but before you go out and enter real challenges, make sure ur verses are LESS PLAYED. because that was very played. nice tho for a noob.

advice for 1liner:
immediate wackness emergency center. . . .

yo can u please check this battle out. its already 10 ups and only 2 votes. the most slept on battle in history.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=91956

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