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05-25-04, 04:12 PM | #1 | |||||||
Flyweight
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10 minute freestyle~ Peep n rate im new~
IP: DB2C A475
10 minute freestyle right here... leave some feed peeps~~~
Leave peeps gather around, feelin astound, veins thumpin like im pumpin ya heart down to grounds/ Handz down to clownz, that i shove around, for wins and other things that i wunt mention right now/ Profound to carry multi crowns, havin pounded n drowned oponents in gowns, as skill let em down/ Sounds out mouths,tortured the clowns n' found impounds to carry tortures, out of police bounds/ Switch... some peeps might not get this flow.. but read it fast and ull notice it....... Cut n hacked open, stacked and jacked ropes nd cracked necks to destroyed hopes when i throw/ jokes out of windows, laser scopes to hitt the domes, although ma targets unknown i still let bullets go/ Vests penetrated, chest ripped and shredded, corpse embedded, in organs and blood red~ed/ (reded- made red) clothes on corpses, lying dead n de~headed in crafted caskets, for the future protectors/
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- -- -- -- -- -- -- - ~Fuck a signature~ - -- -- -- -- -- -- - I dunt play who the fuck is feelin this??/ Im the villain killin n' stellin just for da thrill of it/ The fellin of this adrenalin spillin is still da shit/(stellen- stealin, fellin - feeling) -Rumple_Smoothspinn~~ ~Stop hearts when i drop bars, with bullets leavin even Death with scars~ --Rumple_Smoothspinn~~ Net ReCoRd===== 19-0-8 rapbattle record== 1-0-1 |
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05-25-04, 07:56 PM | #2 | |||||
New to RB
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IP: 67FB F0CB
i liked it good flow just kepp workin on it
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05-25-04, 08:25 PM | #3 | |||||
..Intelligent Hoodlum..
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IP: 7C6F 690C
nice but more like 1 minute tho ahaha nahh but tite shit feed back on u juss got served
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05-25-04, 08:34 PM | #4 | |||
The Truth
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IP: B682 856F
Ummm wasnt feelin it Much but good for U bein New and All i give it a 5.3243/10
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05-26-04, 01:53 AM | #5 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: DB2C A475
Lmao... aight dawg... it was a freestyle.. just wait when i start spittin seriously~1~
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05-26-04, 09:04 AM | #6 | |||||
(00)O=(00) <-- I will knock you the fuck out........
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IP: 5C5F 906E
wasnt feelin it it was too long the flow was a lil to choppy but def not that bad i give it a 6/10 keep elevtin.........
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