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04-10-06, 08:09 PM | #1 | |||||
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Willie Lynch (need to see if i still got it)
IP: 74E5 D992
yea its that nigga yung duke aka forgotten flow aka nitrogen. bout to get back into topicals but needed a warmup, please leave feed and links to your open mics if you have one. and pm me if you are interested in mixing the audio version of this.
understand when i say black im talkin bout the whole culture, not race. the first is about the real willie lynch the second is about the metaphorical willie lynch. Ayo im talkin willie lynch, slave trader, master of fuelin hatred a racist by all nature diminishing hope of patrons and as a member of a slavery pedigree i see predators comin for me for speaking out verity and evidently i all of a sudden fit the description willie see me wearin blue and willie think that im' crippin (pause) i keep the name in the back of my mind its funny how a white person created black on black crime and how today he still got us deploring over our differences and got masters and owners hearing his every sentence so, listen to my sentence, listen to my sentence i dont thing you really hear me man, listen to it, sin ends im winnin, you're winnin, we're winnin, we lost theyre on a never endin` quest to leave us mentally mauled and theyre tryin to depict out smart as bein mentally flawed with willie lynch as an enemy we've continully lost try and deny, but willie's got a rap on ya brain they never freed us, they only put some slack on the chain pittin blacks against blacks is the art of this man we gotta recognize his tricks cause the dawn is at hand fight if u will, but thats just what they want u to do this aint conspiracy this here is just a fact thats been prove my point of the view, my vision of its different from you keep talkin and watch a lynch mob come for your crew we got a willie bush, willie gore, really lookin silly william clinton even got the name but still he isnt willie he the type to kill a willie maybe pass a bill on willie if it came to life or death he would probably squeal on willie we his puppets like our name's millie vanillie(Dont know how to spell) yea its silly but really i see visions of killings by willie i know niggas'll feel me cause im speaking the truth i take the thoughts of the old and use the voice of the youth antidote in truth, like poison to the poisonous fruit prepared for prayer on my knees like im poised for commute see i was brought up on thoughts that the government was a bully willie swazanagger(???) denied the pardon buttton on tookie and willie lynch aint always white, sometimes hes as black as night for example willie parker and his wife wilma rice they think that everything should run on the system of checks and balances put willies name on the ballot and watch the votes come pilling in try and deny, but willie's got a rap on ya brain they never freed us, they only put some slack on the chain pittin blacks against blacks is the art of this man we gotta recognize his tricks cause the dawn is at hand fight if u will, but thats just what they want u to do this aint conspiracy this here is just a fact thats been prove my point of the view, my vision of its different from you keep talkin and watch a lynch mob come for your crew ***will leave feedback and post directly after submitting thread*** Derrick Parker=Willie Parker Condeleza Rice=Wilma Rice Just Breath
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04-10-06, 10:28 PM | #2 | |||||
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Man, fuck. When I first started reading I went "Ohhh...this is gonna be shit." But then I really got into it. Normally I'm not a fan of pieces that lean towards the gangster-mo but you spun it real well with outstanding emotion and imagery. Your metaphors were well pieced and you did a good job of keeping the flow despite a few compromises in your vocab. Keeping the vocab smaller was good wordplay on your part however because it made the verse flow easier and therefore more emotion was felt. Very well written piece. Excellent job. Fav. Lines:
-i know niggas'll feel me cause im speaking the truth i take the thoughts of the old and use the voice of the youth -try and deny, but willie's got a rap on ya brain they never freed us, they only put some slack on the chain -(pause) i keep the name in the back of my mind its funny how a white person created black on black crime Stay Classy.
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04-10-06, 10:38 PM | #3 | ||||
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Drop another link or this will be closed homie
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04-12-06, 10:41 AM | #4 | |||||
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IP: 2CA7 E934
sorry i havnt been here ima go leave more feed
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04-12-06, 11:02 AM | #5 | |||||
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