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this is hip-hop
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wanna start it? must be retarded
fill ya chest wit particles, leave ya heavy hearted emotions departed, potions i farted to delete tha least, atleast, slaughter like a butcher when i push ya to edge wit tha sledge make ya dance like hammer before i slam ya with tha steel, ya feel it, its real cant conceal ya wounds, open like tombs, in tha thriller video hadda kill a ho, got caught cheatin, askin whats tha dillio? so i said really tho............. and bust thru tha basement door to my replacement whore, make a statement raw so you can smell tha beef, and tell ya teeth that they soon to make room, deseace ya lease null nd void, cease ya peace, paranoid lookin ova ya shoulda, chills gettin colda when i send ya ass to north dakota shook up like a soda, explode like bomb atoms and shit, nuclear hit, causin deformation of transportation, leave ya legs twisted cuz im the wickedest, sick-at-this so fresh, cant touch my shit witta stick ![]() ![]()
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I Got Money In Tha Bank
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IP:
hahahaha you fart potions too??...wow *sigh of relief* thank god im not tha only 1
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IP:
haha.. you know it kid.. *farts magic* haha
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IP:
lmao...no doubt
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.The Dark Knight Returns.
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IP:
hmm...i dont really kno wut to say about this piece...it didnt really make n e sense...ur wordplay was weak...and ur vocab too...u need to work on structure...the rhyme scheme in ur first six lines was fucked, seriously...this verse had no topic...it was just blah...so i cant really give u feed about that...u need to open ur mind up...and think of shit to talk about besides wut ur talkin about now...pretty weak overall...3/10
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IP:
i know it doesnt make sense i jus wrote it down real quick on a little peice of paper i found lol its jus a random piece i felt like showin yall
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
cuz its not a real rhyme i ever plan on using.... its jus a little thing wit some multies in it, plus i think its kinda funny.. nd on the structure i know its fucked, its mean to be rapped in one continuous flow, so structure is not necasary
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