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02-27-04, 06:19 PM | #1 | ||||
GONE... I QUIT
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Champion Beat!!!!!!!!
IP: EE26 D30A
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02-28-04, 06:59 PM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: BD3C 891F
It's missing something. The claps are like off. This is nothing that would make it on the radio or on anybody's album. Out of 10, I give it a 2. Sorry.
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04-01-04, 07:06 AM | #3 | ||||||
New to RB
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IP: 2D46 820F
yeh that is hot, good job
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04-10-04, 04:47 AM | #4 | ||||||
New to RB
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IP: 76B1 1347
Yo is this good thers this fatasscalled irvin right well chek this out.............
Irvin your size 64 you can't off the floor it's the bacon that you adour, you chinese whore Irvin your a loner with a 2 Mm boner,Irvin mary had a little lamb but you fucked it like a paid program with your gay friend sam, like 256 meg ram, Irvin your fun to insult wanabe adult, man dont consult. Irvin your ass crack is zigzag ya fag, you have to wipe it with a dishrag, hey nice teletubby schoolbag. Irvin your so queer you humped a deer, drank beer and jerkoff to B.C's premier,Irvin your so fat your ass has a doormat. Irvin did you even pass 4th grade, naw your still at the arcade, crap you missed your appointment to be spade.Wut ever you do, you sweat, heres your favorite simmons casette. Irvin you aint no good at sports, your afraid of airports and you ate 4000 passports. Irvin the trumpet is so gay, your ass has it's owne screen play. I dont listen to reggae , homeless bum on broadway. Gay irvin you listen to Aqua, thats as gay as anyone could get and now your wet. You pissed your pants, up your ass, colony of ants.Irvin bitch you killed your dog, farted some fog and humped a groundhog. Irvin your face is like whoa your dick has a afro, go home to your 20 room chateau.Irvin you ain't sraight go play with your playmate, gay classmate, fuckin cheapskate. Dont ask me if i could spare some change, your language is strange, im washing my hands at the cause of your derange.Irvin, dumbshit you watch Dr.phil man that old mans going downhill to churchill, talk about freewill ya queer, Peace out..... |
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04-10-04, 10:16 AM | #5 | |||||||
Under Oath
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IP: E034 DBC6
Lol ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ But anywayz nice beat man
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05-04-04, 04:29 PM | #6 | ||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 3A6D 6FF6
lol nice beat that was koo
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05-05-04, 02:16 PM | #7 | ||||||
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IP: 4270 3709
Not bad, i like it, keep it up
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05-11-04, 03:14 AM | #8 | ||||||
New to RB
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IP: DAEB 1797
to ben2000:
that flow up there was off.. lol. i dont even know what to think about that shit.... but concerning the beat, im confused why its called the chapion beat. I was thicking id hear some fierce orchestral hits and what not... but its very different. even so i liked it, and btw the claps aren't even the center of attention, so it really doesn't matter if they are a tad off. I do think that the beat is pretty repetitive, so maybe add a lil transition to something new, or just a fill here and there.. Work on the mix and give it a couple finishing touches then lets hear it. btw liked how the end switched slightly. just my few pennies
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05-18-04, 12:27 AM | #9 | ||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: DAA3 2944
hooooooooooooooooooooooootttttttttt shitttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
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05-20-04, 06:44 AM | #10 | ||||
*D.I.E*
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IP: A4D4 2931
it was alright i wasn't really feelin it but better then i could do. so....good work
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05-20-04, 07:28 AM | #11 | |||||||
*~'" The Ch@mP "'~*
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Its pretty good
IP: 8BD9 6563
Its Pretty good, the main looping sound sounds kind of oldschool though...Maybe trying to put another insturment there would help it?
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05-21-04, 03:14 PM | #12 | ||||
Miss Me?
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IP: D5EA 4189
its decent.....could use sum werk....but u got a decent beat......needs mroe flavor to it.....
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05-21-04, 04:36 PM | #13 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 2FB3 38F0
not bad... needs more to it though. too basic.
i couldnt rap on it... but keep doin ya thing
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