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10-17-03, 04:51 AM | #1 | |||||||
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ok this is a workin progress. Original beat by 21stavenueproductions.
feedback good or bad even improvments apreciated. thanx http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/dphylo1.htm
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10-17-03, 03:07 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: C9E3 41C0
dope drop phylo, phates beats are ALWAYS dope, nice flow, lyrics are ill........u down for a collab?
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10-17-03, 03:43 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: B944 C9DF
You know I can appreciate some shit like this. I like real shit, sounds good, I'm not really feelin the beat though, (I think it's the wrong snare or something) and I think you can put more flavor and make us really feel this real shit. Sometimes it's just a matter of beat breaks, or draggin out a word, really makes a difference.
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10-17-03, 03:52 PM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: 9E18 D314
don't like the beat huh...well i'll be schoolin u on beats soon enough Mr. Legend.
lol, seriously though, thanks for the feed. i'm going to be mastering D-Phylo's lyrics on the weekend and customize the beat a bit to match his drop. i'll swap in sum otha snares n see if i can impruve on the original. pz
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10-17-03, 05:46 PM | #5 | ||||||
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^lol awe you know it's all wood, I wanna hear it again when you finish though. Stay up
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10-17-03, 10:55 PM | #6 | |||||||
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IP: 31F3 F67B
Aight don't take this shit the wrong way...just my opinions...
The beat was tight. The sound quality was grrrrreeat...god shit on that. I just wasn't feelin yer delivery but that's just a taste thing, i'm meaning the way that you flowed...voice is good and clear, to someone else this could be the tightest shit, just a different style than i like (a little too fast with the tounge rollin spits)...Lyrics however were tight, you weren't just talkn about some bullshit you had shit ta say...overall definately a good audio drop, nice drop kid, i'll catch up!! |
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10-18-03, 12:51 AM | #7 | |||||||
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Production is good, beat is aight
lyrics is aight, flow is good, delivery is aight 5/10 average keep it up
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10-18-03, 03:32 AM | #8 | |||||||
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thanx youll for the feed back its much apreciated
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