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03-01-04, 10:18 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Bloody Hands
IP: 0BB1 EEDA
My hands are bloody after this act of hate
my hands are bloody when i think i found my soul mate my hands are bloody maybe thats just my fate my hands are bloody and its getting real late my hands are bloody even at this rate my hands are bloody when opening this gate im sick of my hands being bloody why do i have to wait? why do i have to wait for the world to turn why do i have to wait for this boy to learn why do i have to wait for this place to burn i guess maybe some people just dont learn let me see some feedback |
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03-02-04, 12:55 AM | #2 | |||||||
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7.9/10
IP: F3EA 56DB
Creative & Impressive
It makes you think "WHY THIS, WHY THAT?" as if your in so much need for tha truth. Great concept, perfect flow, thoughtful, and encouragin'! From "MY HANDS ARE BLOODY" to "WHY DO I HAVE TO WAIT" is very creative. I See Better! Give Me More! |
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