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sonofisis#1 | 5 | 100.00% | |
phive | 0 | 0% | |
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09-01-04, 02:13 PM | #1 | |
Lyrically Unchallenged
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phive vs sonofisis#1
IP: A9AC 4434
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09-01-04, 02:18 PM | #2 | |
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IP: A9AC 4434
phive has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-01-04 02:18 PM.
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09-01-04, 02:19 PM | #3 | |
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IP: E198 D20B
Sonofisis#1 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-01-04 02:19 PM.
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09-01-04, 02:31 PM | #4 | |
Lyrically Unchallenged
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IP: A9AC 4434
wuts this sonofisis name supposed ta mean its sounds like a disease that makes ya teeth turn green, im a machine and i wont stop till i drop, fuck this sono man ill use his head as a prop, you said you wanted someone ta battle, now im gonna herd you like cattle, yo sono yo rap has been sprayed, im gonna wash this nigga down like a bottle o gatorade, instead of rqapping you should finish the eleventh grade, your style3 is played fo real to live you fucking steal fo every meal, come out tha shade son before your skin turns teal, im gonna make this nigga wish that he never wanted to spit werds, sono you should go back to wonka and pack nerds, you shit packing queer, confront me ill slit ya throat with a broken beer, now before ya leave id just like ta say next tim,e ya wanna battle i betta get pay.
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09-01-04, 02:52 PM | #5 | |
a.k.a Sonic
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IP: E198 D20B
Iv'e Read Yo Rhymes Kid, And You Leave Me Bored To Death
He Spells His Name "Phive" coz he Can't Afford The F You Ain't Shit Bitch, I'm changin The Game Rap's In Ya Blood? Well I'm Drainin Ya Vains What Type Of Fuckin Shit Do U Queers Get Taught? I'll Shoot Ya Brain Out, Make It Hit The Ground Hard So We Can Hear Ya Thoughts I'm Gettin At You Like This Coz I Don't Really Like Punks While My "Bars" are Worth Millions, Like Successful Night Clubs Yo Whole Fuckin Life Is Jus Out Of Place Yo Punches Don't Land, It's Like U Droped Em In Outer Space You're a Clown Disgrace, With Out a Place, I'm Bound To Take Ya Head And Pound Ya Face, Yo styles a Waist U Steped Up And Got Wrecked, ya Know How Us Soldiers Get After I Win i'll Hold You're Defeat High So U'll Never Get Over It Rip & Slash, Rip Ya Ass, I Bet This Kids A Fag who Fits In Drag This Is Sad, Yo Window Of Opportunity's simply Tented Glass Even Windows XP know U Suck, They Even Hate Stupid Asses If U Write More That 100 words, then Yo Computer Crashes I'm about to really hurt this Niggas feelings If His Computer Had a Virus, he'd prolly give it Penecillin |
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09-01-04, 03:01 PM | #6 | |
a.k.a Sonic
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IP: E198 D20B
what do you mean by a weak match up?
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09-01-04, 03:13 PM | #7 | |
Flyweight
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IP: C4F6 6F3F
Voted For: Sonofisis#1
This was a easy win for Sonofisis#1, (Iv'e Read Yo Rhymes Kid, And You Leave Me Bored To Death He Spells His Name "Phive" coz he Can't Afford The F You Ain't Shit Bitch, I'm changin The Game Rap's In Ya Blood? Well I'm Drainin Ya Vains) That first two bars was really good....LOL. (I'm about to really hurt this Niggas feelings If His Computer Had a Virus, he'd prolly give it Penecillin) Aiight punch but, needs work on the end rhyming words. Penecillin and Feelings?? Don't actually rhyme buddy. But still a good punch. Phive- Structure is all around bad, to the point in which I didn't read the whole thing. I don't know where your rhymes begin and end sometimes. You need to work on a solid structure. Opener-Sonofisis Punches-Sonofisis Multis-Sonofisis Punches-Sonofisis Closer-Sonofisis Final Vote- Sonofisis, hands down. Phive-You need to work on elevating son. Try to control your structure a lil too.
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09-01-04, 03:31 PM | #8 | |
Lyrically Unchallenged
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IP: A9AC 4434
you got good flow by the way im white my nigga wutts up
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09-01-04, 06:13 PM | #9 | |
a.k.a Sonic
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IP: E198 D20B
my nigga????? I just commented in a thread on how you white motha fuckas always carelessly use that word, are you atleast ghetto, coz if you're not then don't call me a nigga, if you are, then big ups.. but thanx for the compliment tho..
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09-01-04, 11:14 PM | #10 | |
a.k.a Sonic
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IP: E198 D20B
Ups
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09-01-04, 11:16 PM | #11 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 68E4 45C0
Voted For: Sonofisis#1
sono took it...betta flow............................ Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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09-02-04, 12:53 AM | #12 |
RobKilla
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IP: 44D1 1E5B
Voted For: Sonofisis#1
DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that shyt was hot!!! it was hilarious too... this was a really one sided battle!!! tha structure wasnt tha best i've seen but those punchlines were. that shyt was hella good... lemme stop dick ridin... if you write more than 100 words yo computer crashes? that was funny... these punchlines clearly won the battle as they were better than Phive's whole verse!!! phive, yo flow was really hard to follow seeing as you wrote it like a young authors story. it seemed like you didnt put any thought into your verse... there were no real punches except herd you like cattle which makes no sense. this verse seemed like he put down whateva rhymed easiest. v/ Isis |
09-02-04, 01:58 AM | #13 |
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IP: B9AB 64CC
Voted For: Sonofisis#1
sonofisis wins this battle pretty well. His punches were on point n structure was pretty good some multies were kinda lame tho but other than that the verse was pretty good phive needs to work on that structure its really killin him cuz u cant tell where to stop plus the punches w erent that hot n he needs to b more creative holla at me http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=146204 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=146167
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