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Deva whitelightning Auspicious Beat: Whats beef - Biggie Hook: Whats beef? beef is wen u kno u cant goto sleep beef is wen u know i gon creep beef is wen i drop shit on u for no reason beef is wen i pull it, and u tweakin beef is wen u got aint got time to be thinkin x2 I drop shit on niggas becuz they start-it Hop along wit yo ice on my wrist I spit flames at this kids structure, like an arsonist Make yo departure off RB, cuz u bite my shit then drop it like a depart-men-ist Grab you cut ur vocal cords, reach deeper Find my book in ur mind, 'defined' my rhymes in-it But half this shit, i didnt finish-it, so get-off-it U aint shit but a biter, I decipher why im dropin-this But then i remeber u pop-my-shit P.Min me sayin 'lets battle' you set it up, never came Cuz he couldnt use his-brain, its insane, he'd prob use my rhyme Win, and then brag, aint nuttin but a fag Hook: Whats beef? beef is wen u kno u cant goto sleep beef is wen u know i gon creep beef is wen i drop shit on u for no reason beef is wen i pull it, and u tweakin beef is wen u got aint got time to be thinkin x2 This is beef, takin my hook addin a beat Dropin it this week, flippin the book, and poppin it on the street Didnt think i'd catch ya? Betch-ya, u get thugged this week U made a mistake, fam, even ur men aint goin to ur wake Ill merk-em-also, Paulo ur brother, bout to get smothered Mama gettin covered in clips Dad, already in the grave, cant do shit bout-it But i wouldnt doubt-it, i prob commited it 'LoCo u on some ridilin shit' - Cut ur shit from ear-to-ear U kno im sik-wit-it, so spit-it, off ur dome... Cuz im spittin flames off this shit like a fireplace-at-home U say u thuggin? u buggin nigga, u live in suburbs, upper class Fuck-ur-past, u aint neva commited-a-crime I chiefed wit u, thought u was a real nigga Thought wrong, now im pissed Joe Brown couldnt free-u-from-this-decision Every one can be witnessin-it, I dont care i got u sucked-like-a-pussy Why the fuck u tryin to push me? Hook: Whats beef? beef is wen u kno u cant goto sleep beef is wen u know i gon creep beef is wen i drop shit on u for no reason beef is wen i pull it, and u tweakin beef is wen u got aint got time to be thinkin x2 U got beef i gave-it 12x12 the size of ur grave-bitch Ive already signed u up Fined-u wit the punishment-of-death Dont hate, i never said i was the best... But ima betta den the rest My uzi is bigger then urs Go figure, urs is prob mine, the devine god's product Module of destruction, chemical conbustion Ur splene gettin ripped open Hopen u left-town Cuz now u looked down upon Fuckin mark..... Hook: Whats beef? beef is wen u kno u cant goto sleep beef is wen u know i gon creep beef is wen i drop shit on u for no reason beef is wen i pull it, and u tweakin beef is wen u got aint got time to be thinkin
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This was straight, on some gangsta shit right here. Going to a nice beat as well. It had a pretty good flow through out the whole thing. Could have used more vocab and multies. But it was a pretty good drop hommie. Keep elevatin...
-Ayo peep My link inside my sig, tell me what you think bout it... OUT -High Class a.k.a Confusion
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yo that had good flow.....i liked it....not the best but its up there....my opinion I think U Used Your Chorus to Much.....but the chorus was still Good...pacaso mac I wont ask Why U hate em........Your structure could use some work but allround a good read Peace 7/0 Kuz (v)
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This was alright i thought.....your flow was pretty good in this though i liked that.....your chorus was good also i thought....your structure could use a touch up though, some of the lines were real short others were kinda long but nothing you cant fix...just keep at it.
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Dont hate, i never said i was the best...
But ima betta den the rest didnt like this line it was predictable. but yo all the rest beilieve that. Nice flow everything gg.
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