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03-25-03, 09:28 PM | #1 | ||||
Kevin Brown
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Round 1: Angelic SheShe
IP: 6FA7 7304
Topic: Shadows
Due: Tuesday April 1st. Line max: 16 lines any more will not be counted. The top 15 will advance.
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03-31-03, 01:18 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 16CE 0E8C
Darkness overcomes and daylight disappears
Lunar Eclipse’s condenses all your fears ~ You took your life with deaths precious red lace Believed you’d see heaven instead of that other place ~ Death thought wrong as you fell into shadows of hate You took your life so he took your fate ~ Encryptions of lost souls condemn the final arsenal All death wanted was freedom, all you gave it was hell ~ Your shadows lingered next to your new reality They’re your dirty little secrets from your obscure fatality ~ Face them in fear or face them with honor and dignity Confront your shadows and face your mortal enemy ~ Negligence is intelligible to my psychiatric needs My shadows follow me from hunger to feed ~ Sarcophagus closes, you lost this fight The shadows take over and there will be only night ~ |
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04-01-03, 06:16 PM | #3 | ||||
Kevin Brown
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IP: 6FA7 7304
closed until judging.
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04-06-03, 12:56 PM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: BFE5 28C7
Start voting
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04-07-03, 12:29 PM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: 1A2E E198
This piece was hot i think it should go on. lots of emotion behind it
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04-07-03, 02:12 PM | #6 | |||||||
I Am The Light
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IP: CB2E 7CE0
I liked this piece you should go to the next round....
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04-07-03, 06:17 PM | #7 | ||||||
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IP: 16CE 0E8C
ty for voting on mine
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04-08-03, 02:03 AM | #8 | |||||||
.-.Marxism.-.
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IP: 5F55 0048
vote = goes next round
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04-08-03, 03:05 AM | #9 | ||||||
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IP: 703B ED0E
vote: It should go to tha next round...hope I see you there...good competition, but I think you voted me off survivor style...but thats alright, no hard feelings...lol
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04-08-03, 06:47 AM | #10 | ||||||
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IP: BFE5 28C7
Probably, just probably, the best peice i've read so far..
..i don't think i need to say anything about it really...had about 2-3 flaws, which were not that relevant anyway... ..Vote: DOES go through to the next round... ..(i tihnk we have a surprise front runner in this tourney now..).. |
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04-12-03, 05:12 PM | #11 | |||||||
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IP: BFE5 28C7
Quote:
8.5/10 |
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