Battle Rules:

Optional Topics
20-40 lines
3 day Check & Drop
3-0 KO
4-1 kO


6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Good Luck.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-25-05 at 07:08 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Closed - Expired battle win

unofficial check-in......... thinkin up a topic........ i'll post my piece tomorrow........

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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance

my poetry:
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whats the topic...or is jus 2 diff. topics for both competitors....????

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well as u kno tha topic is

love

checkin and then i will....aight....

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chip has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-24-05 12:44 AM.

Sin`cere has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-24-05 12:45 AM.

This Thing Like Love
what u do to me, the way your being caresses my soul,
apart of me, two halves of the same whole object,
i tried to be objective goin into this,
checked all of your references,
your old man wasn't enough to fullfil your needs,
if love iz a test, u gon get a A-paper and i promise to never cheat,ever,
love ain't a word i use often, so u know i'm legit,
your hair beautiful, your eyes beautiful,
your soul iz pure, my gifts are perfect, bcuz you're worth it,
you so fine i'm glad you're mine,
but would never treat u like property,
for u i'll do anything, i'll be more than i was,
and i'll change what i will be, i see the future,
and in the end i want it to be,
just exactly how i have forseen,
u with me in this extordinary thing that can't be captured by the words in a verse,
that has no structure or flow other than it's own,
it's more than that word, cuz i love u more than that,
grace is amazing, me and u are the perfect balance,
cuz i'm me and you're full of talent,
girl i love u and i'll put down myself to prove it,
if need be, fuck this battle, i'll lose it or forfit,
what ever u see fit, cuz we much more than that he say,she say,
much more than anything mortal, we can never be stopped,
we're make music, u R&B i'm Hip-Hop,
i can tell u an angel, how could u get with me,
u came down and blessed my life with u,
i thank the Lord for raining this perpetual blessing from above,
and for this thing we have, this thing like love.

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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance

my poetry:
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Voted For: Sin`cere

you got this,emotion is solid. structure helped flow, use of vocab really made your peice shine above you oponent's.

both dropped some what weak but meh,good battle

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uppin 4 votes.....................................

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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance

my poetry:
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