Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-29-04 at 10:35 AM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

DQ.. freeposting for votes

System Crasher has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-04 10:35 AM.

sHoTTaBoY has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-04 10:35 AM.

System Crasher, Shottaboy Slasher,
You lyrical abuser, Rhymes clasher,
I spitt on you to win alot faster,
Can't spitt on me, I'm emcee master,
I will trample you like a train, Chu Chu!
Oh and rappings not about rhyming in Tutu's,
You should prepare to lose pretty quick,
You couldn't win this with yo mom on ya dick!
The reason I left two lines behind, when I was strokin,
Was so, you could explain to these emcees why your chokin!

Peace out!~~~

Aight You Bout To Witness A 'rise & Fall' In Juss One VERSE../
I'm The Gift This Here Bitch Is Bout To Get CURSED../
I Can Achieve More In One Punchline Than This Fool Can Achieve In A CONCERT../
I'm Stompin The Shit Out You An Only Thing You See Is The Soul Of My CONVERSE../
I'm Like An 'ATM' In The Way I Make This System DISPURSE../

I'm Runnin Lyrical Rings Round This Kat n He Lookin A Lil Tubby So How Da Fuck You Expect To Catch Me SON?../
Man, I'm Married To My GUN../
So B4 You Go n Akt Up You Must Always Remeber TWO IS BETTER THAN ONE!!../

Nice Rhymin' System, Propps Dogg! Much Respect
Uppppppppppppppppp'n 4 Votes Ya'll!!!

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This Battles Sumthan EPIC, Vote On This Rite Here n I'll Return The Favor With An HONEST An WELL EXPLAINED Vote

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Voted For: System Crasher

you took this yours flowed well and it had some pretty funny lines in it,

shotta your rhymes were a lil bit streched other than that good battle

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

I Can Achieve More In One Punchline Than This Fool Can Achieve In A CONCERT../
I'm Stompin The Shit Out You An Only Thing You See Is The Soul Of My CONVERSE../

OoO wee dis line wuz sic sHoTTaBoY took dis one his structure is good easy to read his wordplay flowed nice

System Crasher u started off kinda slow wit no pl's but ur last line hit hard but sHoTTaBoY jus wuz more consient wit his flow but u got lyrics tho

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people talk but who listens.......i dont give a shit wat u think.............u dont mean shit to me.........but if u do mean sumthing............wat u think can destroy me...............da reason why i hav hatred.........is cuz i LOVE so much

Appreciate the Honesty n Votes Ya'll, Even Tho PLUSTWO Didnt Explain His Vote I Appreciate The Vote.....
CHAM Good Lookin My Nigguh

UPPPPPPPPPPPPPP'n 4 More VOTES!!

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asight ill explain it now, i liked systems more cos it had funnier punches and shorter lines i thought your lines were a bit over streched but it was still a good verse...

overall in my opinion system came stronger with his punches.

there that betta?

Yeah... Respected dog!.... shotta you were pretty good!

Uppin for votes!

Uppn for votes!!!!

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

YO ONCE AGAIN SHOTTABOY HANDS DOWN YALLT THINK ITS AN LIL NEWB THINK WRONG YALL BEST TO BRING SOME HEAT DAMN IT!

shottaBOY

PUNCHES-8/10
FLOW-7/10
WORDPLAYS 10/10
STRUTURE-9/10
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SYSTEM CRASGHER
PUNCHES-5/10 (WEAK)
FLOW-8/10
STRUTURE-10/10
WORDPLAYS-6/10
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YO SYSTEM WORK ON DEM PUNCHES AND WORDPLAYS DEN U'LL GET BETTA

YO SHOTTABOY

RETURN AN FAV DA LINK ITS IN MY SIG MAYNE

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