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06-05-03, 04:55 PM | #1 | ||||||
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To my slain nigga
IP: 798E 1507
Yo we was born in the same hospital//
slept in the same bed me on the side you in the middle// lived the same riddle// The same bubble // got into the same trouble// always togheter never apart my double// wearing the same clothes and shoes// fucking with the same hoes confused// hanging with the drug pros amused// fighting with the same style one-twos// knocking niggas out they socks// flocking to dope fiens selling rocks// locking the doors to count our stocks// Me and my nigga ran these blocks// When his gun went off mine followed// when the cops came rocks swallowed// money never borrowed// it was accepted as presents// acted like kings but lived like peasents// graced each other with the others prescence// any beef came it wasnt pleasant// Ill always be in debt your companionship never could be reimbursed//still not believing inyour death left on this earth cursed//why is it the good niggas gotta go first// You always said the best things in life are hid//until the day we meet again ill always be lookin kid// Rest in peace my brother, my friend, David |
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06-05-03, 05:38 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 3EC7 7FD2
this was tight i liked this stay up
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06-05-03, 05:47 PM | #3 | |||
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IP: 4577 CD9A
it was tight but it was kinda hard to flow with it cuz the lines were to short. Keep elevating It was good.
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06-05-03, 05:49 PM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: 4577 CD9A
^^he said it perfectly...nice but ya lines were way too short
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06-05-03, 06:13 PM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: 798E 1507
Thanks for the comments ill try to make my lines longer and see how it flows. one.
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06-05-03, 08:38 PM | #6 | |||||||
Watch And Learn
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IP: 7B03 F60D
i stopped readin right when it said u slept in tha same bed, that made me sick
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06-05-03, 10:42 PM | #7 | |||||||
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IP: FF98 53B8
Like tha other cats said....Ur Lines were way too short...But this drop was Nice
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06-05-03, 10:53 PM | #8 | ||||||
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IP: 4577 CD9A
Pretty Nice..Holla At Me
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