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01-07-04, 09:33 PM | #1 | ||||
Sane Scientist
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The Diss..
IP: 8076 4754
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...342#post1063342
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...524#post1063524 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...566#post1063566 You see this newbie Likes to duck battles then talk about how im wack... You have no idea..!!!!! Rippen... Warm up I destroy with heat..and seek the weak..I -Stole his Marvel- statues so how can this No Name character beat me.. He could script Talib Kweli and still not come with 'Quality'.. Im Discrete the way I DissaCreep..I set up a battle for him and Crooked still hasn't dropped In weaks.. This will be a easy defeat..Floorless victory...because when I knock him out his anatomy won't be concrete.. Now view Coorked's wack link.... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103359 Getting Hot He calls me a fag..I seen his last couple of battles and view The comments on this queen of Drags. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103628 It's evidence all emcees says Comical only talks about Dicks.. So who's Gay..I Cock back bust Head and Spray..Wait I just mention Cock...watch Comical, puts his mouth to my Jock.. You will never create Straight scripts..Ur a Crooked line spittin to a period..Ur a broken Bitch..Hence because of your alias you will remain with a female stench.. He's Dead Your not equal..You stay being -Feeble-..No your not a -Vet- that just wouldn't be -Comical- <(Lol damn)...Literally Kill you.. calling me whack..!! While you no show like strippers with No Ass.. Slide slash Dash..is him jerkin..This kat is a women..He should battle for -Pink Slips- the way he stays in Drag Flurtin..Im steady merkin...Why even waist another Line on this jerk..?? because like transparent objects I can see threw this chics Skirt..........!!! Boooooooooooooom!!! |
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01-07-04, 09:35 PM | #2 | ||||
Sane Scientist
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IP: 8076 4754
Oh yes his name is Crooked Comical....now you can get my punches...
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01-07-04, 09:44 PM | #3 | |||||||
..Soft Focus..
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IP: 1B3B C284
This was a pretty good diss, i liked some of the lines some were kinda wittie and some were just not to complex. But the overall structure flow etc was good i felt your flow got a little better on some lines which was cool but ovber all this was a steady and pretty good diss...keep it up
Return the faver...can you hit up one of my links...preferably the weathers art or the teenage eyes....thanks
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Open Mics The Weathers Art http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673 My Teenage Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850 Secluded http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851 Open Your Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461 |
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01-07-04, 09:50 PM | #4 | ||||
Sane Scientist
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IP: 8076 4754
Ty....
yes I will hit yours up... oh yes and Uppin |
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01-08-04, 01:00 PM | #5 | ||||
Sane Scientist
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IP: B2D8 7F35
Uppin....stop sleepin...
and critique |
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01-08-04, 01:04 PM | #6 | |||||||
Banned: Spamming
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IP: 3354 DAC6
You didnt use my style correctly at all, most of the disses werent that hard .. all the 'comic' references you used got kind of old. DissACreep line was gay.
I didnt like it.
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01-08-04, 01:23 PM | #7 | ||||
Sane Scientist
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IP: B2D8 7F35
lol thanks for comment...
I thought it was good considering I keystyled it....was hard to me... But ty.. |
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01-08-04, 01:25 PM | #8 | ||||||
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IP: C1DA C961
..nice diss..kept it simple and it worked..simple wordplay..nice..
..vote on this.. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104991 |
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