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Motherfucking nuisance
IP: E101 97D0
2 hot 2 handle
lyrical killer mc nookie FREESTYLE:tell me wot u think Im tryna rhyme to a whack ass beat Got the dj scared like I was clapping heat cause my flows sick,I got no limit like Master P Ima natural disaster see, i was born fucked up Got dropped as a baby,now im more fucked up Im like the LOX meets shady,but more fucked up 15 yr old thug, all drugged up, im the new shit U old rappers is all washed, cant do shit Ya'll useless, im Katz Frost,MO'fucing nuisance getting on ya nerves, like dirty south music So fuck you, if you dont like my style we can meet up at night,fight and it might get wild Murder you so crazy,the cops put an X on the files Im Lenox Lewis, in abattle you, you Mike tyson Both got hard punclines,but in a fight you be biting Man You'd think I was moses,the way I be Smiting Your'e first born child, Im like jhonny rotten Im vile My rhymes is sick like bile, your rhymes suck till the end Like 8 MILE mother fuker ![]() |
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IP: 009D 91CF
nice sh*t, flow were alright, an structure, were all good. But it were a lil simple, an needed tab more complexity.
Part from dat it were sum nice sh*t. peace |
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IP: 477E 6B1C
dat shit was pretty tight....but u need 2 work on structure and seetin ya self up 4 da next bar....
not bad though..i like the lennox lewis and mike tyson rhyme..... peep my shit and return da favor.. -1- |
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IP: 340D 8B8F
Yeah it was alright i thought....structure in this was ok, it could use some work in some spots though i think.....flow in this was ok, it could have been better....try adding some better multies to this to make it better...but keep at it.
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IP: 202C A952
this barley made decent... you said up like 5440934 times... not creative... but it was a ok piece tho... just to just go off the head.. no thought into it... welp keep goin. get big... elevate...
Caesar... on3 |
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IP: E101 97D0
thanx 4 da feed back
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