aight man im'a type it up here quick yo.

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LGB FreeYayo

A.K.A. Lil Nae2

ChYld
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Lyrical Crook

Aight, here's my ten lines, wish I had more but that's fine whore//
Just hear tha lyrics I implore, hardcore throwin you on tha floor//
I'm lyrical-insane causin' you lyrical-pain, shit I'ma kill and thats real//
You see me creepin RHYTHM 2-1-2, see you blew up as I errupt//
Your rythym is goin korupt, you shoulda ducked out, you bout nothin//
I'm comin and I'm showin you somethin, you fake and these lyrics I make//
What's it take to shake you off, I bust a smirnoff bottle on yo dome//
Decapitate you, put you head on a chrome platter, give it to yo dad//
Shit, hes mad, fuck it, I'll kill all you kinfolk when I burst like tha Incredible Hulk//
You all gone, so bitch on you I piss and aint nobody goin to miss ya//

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LGB FreeYayo

A.K.A. Lil Nae2

ChYld
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Lyrical Crook

half ya shit didnt even rhyme..not a punch was thrown
simple rhyme scheme like tryin to rhyme dad wit dome
i could kill ya wit too lines, just another dumb fuck kid
surround ya wit bullet proof glass, u would still get hit
"May all the real thugz RIP", nah you aint real, u wack
cant kill me,im ya uncle...u dead nephew for talin back
tryin to kick box wit god.......
....you a star? well my rhymes is leavin you sunned
Try ya style: not-rhyming-words, u wack bitch//
...For that ya life is Done


Explainations

"May all the real thugz RIP", nah you aint real, u wack
cant kill me,im ya uncle...u dead nephew for talin back

^^ His Sig says May all the real thugz RIP
^^ His name is Nephew J...nephew - uncle

[2]

tryin to kick box wit god.......
....you a star? well my rhymes is leavin you sunned
Try ya style: not-rhyming-words, u wack bitch//

^^ In his profile it says he kick boxes
^^ He uses --- between some of his words and he uses //

dumb-bitch, tha shit aint gotta rhyjme at tha end of each line, and im realer, ill kill ya with a tiller but naw anyways yall ppl drop some votes on this shit hear

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LGB FreeYayo

A.K.A. Lil Nae2

ChYld
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Lyrical Crook

^^ yo sway again ill come on my real name and actually try

i aint no fuckin newbie...dont act like i dont know what im talkin bout

Wow do i need to break this down???? Y u fuckin wid these little kids. Fuck it..

Punches-212
Personals-212
Flow-J
Wordplay-212
Meta's-212
Creativity-212
Multi's-212
Overall-212 took this by everything.
~1~

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vote nephew


no explanation needed


well its cuz he punched better and flow nicer


rhym you need work man lots of work

seriously go work on ure spelling first though

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Ok break down...

Nephew J

Wow elevated my man...Some times you had a rhyme scheme...then during your flow it just died out...poor structure and no punches....


RHYTHM 212

You atleast had some schemes and punches...

" could kill ya wit too lines, just another dumb fuck kid
surround ya wit bullet proof glass, u would still get hit"

Was a good enough line to take him,.....and you literally killed him with two lines lol...no hate...

Nephew J....fam just try to get a better rhyme scheme and hard hitting punches....stay battling...

Vote:RHYTHM 212

Please return the fav and poll vote on this link..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98441

opener- 212
closer-212
punches-212
multis-212
flow-j
sturucture-212
personals-212
metas-212
overall-212 easily

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sorry ^ that was me................................................ ...............................................

Thanks Emerge, at least you dont throw dickridin votes out like all thesse other people in here!!!!!

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LGB FreeYayo

A.K.A. Lil Nae2

ChYld
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Lyrical Crook

Nephew J

Aight, here's my ten lines, wish I had more but that's fine whore//
Just hear tha lyrics I implore, hardcore throwin you on tha floor//
I'm lyrical-insane causin' you lyrical-pain, shit I'ma kill and thats real//
You see me creepin RHYTHM 2-1-2, see you blew up as I errupt//
Your rythym is goin korupt, you shoulda ducked out, you bout nothin//
I'm comin and I'm showin you somethin, you fake and these lyrics I make//
What's it take to shake you off, I bust a smirnoff bottle on yo dome//
Decapitate you, put you head on a chrome platter, give it to yo dad//
Shit, hes mad, fuck it, I'll kill all you kinfolk when I burst like tha Incredible Hulk//
You all gone, so bitch on you I piss and aint nobody goin to miss ya//

Punches didn't seem to hit hard
Good structure.. could use a lil work
Flow was goin good...someparts sucked ass tho
Wordplay....ya need it
Personals....get more
Elevate some....
Overall........12/20



RHYTHM 212

half ya shit didnt even rhyme..not a punch was thrown
simple rhyme scheme like tryin to rhyme dad wit dome
i could kill ya wit too lines, just another dumb fuck kid
surround ya wit bullet proof glass, u would still get hit
"May all the real thugz RIP", nah you aint real, u wack
cant kill me,im ya uncle...u dead nephew for talin back
tryin to kick box wit god.......
....you a star? well my rhymes is leavin you sunned
Try ya style: not-rhyming-words, u wack bitch//
...For that ya life is Done

Punches were decently hard
Wordplay wasn't that great
Personals...not many
Flow...good..
Creativity....straight...
Overall....14/20


I thought RHYTHM took this simply because
His punches hit harder
And it all flowed well....

Vote-RHYTHM 212

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^^ emerge is my friend

i told him i was fuckin around wit newbies so he came and voted against me for no reason

and i told you i aint a noob

stop actin like ya tough...i murked u wit a 1 min key and wit no effort

__________________

WHAT CELESTAL? YOU MUST BE TRIPPIN DAWG CAUSE I SPIT REAL AND AM HARDER THAN YOU, SO DON'T TRIP YO, AIGHT

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Murdered:

LGB FreeYayo

A.K.A. Lil Nae2

ChYld
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Lyrical Crook