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01-05-04, 01:20 AM
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16 for my Queen (<-- What a gay name)
IP: 1A7F 5D33
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&postid=1053150
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103014 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&postid=1053178 By the look in your eyes it’s clear we were meant to be together And We could make our sunshine even during the worst weather Incredible sex life, all night, but we can past that Cuz other couples problems is something we laugh at In fact that, is just something we use to become stronger See it as competition just bcuz we know we can last longer Together all day and inseparable all night We aint gotta have friends cuz everything is all right If something’s on my mind it shows and you notice No matter what it is you can solve it and I know this Your there for me whenever, I’m there for you forever We’d both drop anything just to be Together Never have a problem cuz we never have a reason to Nothing but trust and love for me that’s why I believe in you Enough trust between eachother there’s no need to say you love me And I swear to god, I’ll never let anyone or anything take you away from me |
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01-05-04, 01:28 AM
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IP: 4577 CD9A
you stuck to the subject well...and I saw some multiez...the flow was good...vocab wasn't great but it will suffice...overall this was a decent drop...stay up and keep doin' ya thing son...
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01-06-04, 12:12 AM
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IP: 1A7F 5D33
Upppppp
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01-06-04, 10:57 AM
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IP: 927C 4CFE
It was pretty good. It had a lot of feeling to it. I think the flow was a little off, but wordplay was good. Nice drop.
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