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IP: 4584 DED9
I'll flip a zone wit ya.. Go to war wit ya
Go on tour wit ya...Hustle over shores wit ya I'm ya equalizer....Call me the fourth Ace I'll be ya counselor...advise you through ya court case I'll never tell a lie...Ignore the reprecussions Forget the books...Money doesn't need a discussion If you need me it's nothing...wink if you need me to touch him Blink.. and he bleeding or something..leaking for thinking he something. Oracleez..ride with the stream.. you don't wanna collide with the team Oracle ride with a beam..silence on all of his things... Just give me a reason to pause..Twenty ain't even a brawl.. Give me a hundred emcee's..versus the one Oracleez. Beats? I'm breaking 'em down..Streets?..I blaze with the pound Thunderous.. shaking the ground..Running up.. shaking you down Built up the stream from the ground...word been getting around Oracle serve... any with nerve to run with the hound |
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IP: FF89 3C60
Great flow...
Nice use of vocab... Not sure if this is about someone here, though... If it is, I've never heard of em. Mostly self prop, but you incorporated some nice shit and didn't make it the boring as hell "I'm great" shit I see alot. Best thing about this was the flow and the multi's. Very tight. Peace
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IP: 4584 DED9
Thanx brodie....i appreciate the feed back..Keep it coming ya'll..just some quick shit to get your beak wet...
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IP: DF7B C8F7
thought the flow was good.... nice n smoothe.... good use of multis....bit vague..... but quite good for a key.....pZ.....
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IP: DD10 0DFF
Yeah I agree this was alright here......structure was alright for a key i thought....the flow was good in this, it stayed on point, didnt really fall off....you had some nice multies, liked that.....Vocab was alright....but overall this was a alright piece....keep at it.
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