aight son......

10 lines

house rules

verses due tonight at 12 est........

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CHECKIN IN............

ill start keyin my shit later tonight...........

waitin on ur check in though...........

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CHECKIN IN. ill spit first

This will be your last gasp of air, so use it wisely cos u aint got time to spare
my rhymes are like religious scripts, people read dem for spitting tips, Ill burn you with my best resources, ill dive into my raping sources, ur a criminal producing petty crimes, every MC knows u nick my lines
ull try and attack me with all ur might, but my rhymes are simply dynamite, ur as tight as a prostitutes minge at the end of a night
ur down ur out ur on da streets, iv shown no mercy, just like my peeps

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blah............once again, no need to come my hardest.........aight.........check it out..........yo, yo........

see i already merked one cat today, now next is lil-john, but what sux for u is i never left the fightin mind, and my guns r still-drawn/
its no question ya skills-gone, i dont know if u ever had any talent, but i really dont care, i just continue to kill-on/

cause i come through wit loaded artillery always loaded-to-shoot, but i just left my ammo at home today, cause i took bombs and there an explosion-an-route/
enough starin-time-ta-shoot, and u claim u reppin the streets, but when its time to battle ur already wearin-a-suit/

u got 10 posts and prolly learned to rap 10 minutes-ago, ur gay and wack, a disgrace and ull never be able to split-this-show/
just quit-u-ho, no one wants to read that shit, ur rhymes make people sick, but cats still huddle round there comps waitin for me to me spit-though/

when people hear ya remains, in the mail all u get is a blank-check, do us all a favor and quit rappin ur just makin-a-wreck/
u must mistake-the-trek, cause ur gay as fuck, and my punches rap round yo face, and show no regret as i break-ya-neck/

the only time this guy thinks he wins is when he beats-the-meat, this guy stands on what he thinks is skills, but when i pull the "sheet" ima laugh when his face hits the concrete/
u were wrong to speak, when u spit u most remind me of shoes.....always wearin "da feet" (defeat)/

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blah, whateva............no need to come hard...........

7 min keystyle............

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UPPIN # 1 !!!!!!!!!!!!!

LETS GET SOME VOTES UP IN DIS PEICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AND LIL JOHN U CAN UP TO HOMBRE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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if i culd....vote 2 yo wat up......
structure: yo....even tho it waz out-strethed a lott
punhces: yo...didnt need 2 com out hard.....john barely had any
flow: yo.....eazy 2 follow
opener: once again yo
clozer:jon.,...yoz waz kinda corny
vote:...if i culd.....yo....n jon needz 2 elevate

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when i move u move,(just liked dat?)
when i move u move,(just liked dat?)
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without a doubt What Up got this shit. His structure was a little long, but his punches were good, and he was rhyming inside of his rhymes. Lil John's lines were sorta played but he had some pretty nice multis, but the rest of ya rap could use some work dawg. My Vote goes to YO WHAT UP.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105535

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slept on battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=105181
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113861

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105843

plze return da favor......plzeeee

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when i move u move,(just liked dat?)
when i move u move,(just liked dat?)
hell yea ay DJ bring dat back!!![SIZE=5]

HiP HoP ReMiX
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^^^thanx for the votes...........

UPPIN # 2 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LETS GET SOME MORE VOTES UP IN HERRRE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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punches yo
structure yo
opener yo
closer both sucked
vote yo.......................................

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This Was A 1 Sided Battle But N E Way Yo What Up Took It Easily With The Punches,Vocab,Personals,Disses,Creativity, Etc....

Vote=Yo What Up

Can You Vote On This??..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105778

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WINS: Casualty{5-1}, BK{5-0}, Zarbon{6-0}, Sam Skillet{5-1},pictureperfect2{5-0}, Brethren{5-1}, HYPER-ACTYVE {5-0} Next??
LOSES: MC Nookie BS (mods took away my votes herb ass niggas)
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VOTE 4 CAMRONS GETEM GIRLS VIDEO ON BET.COM lol

^^^aight thanx for the votes.............

UPPIN # 3 !!!!!!!!!!!!!

LETS GET SOME MORE VOTES ALL UP IN DIS PEICE!!!!!!!!!!!!

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yo what up merked this kid

yo-
punches-9/10
strucute-7/10
personals-8/10
metas-6/10
FLOW-6.5/10
overall-yo one this shit

lil jon u really need to elevate

Lil Jon--Spit in the link in my sig
Yo-Return Favor In sig

overall-yo what up

Pz...1

^^^thanx for the vote...............

UPPIN # 4 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LETS GET SOME MORE VOTES HOMBRES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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