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A Thing Called Rage
IP: 07E0 A9F2
A rush of adrenaline like instant amphetamine
Seeing red ya explode like Armageddon has set within A testament testing limits, to try ya best to win Without mentioning, cos its uncontrollable by anything Jus a specimen, of emotion that cant be defined With courageous devotion, overriding your mind Settling when the level of pressure has declined Manifests again, any time, when another steps the line Yes until then, confined, lying dormant and laid to rest Designed as a reflex to convalesce from the mess A primal urge, emerging instinctive if it’s pressed Concurring to the temperament associated with stress And on a pivot weighted by what you like and detest At best it’s less, at worst can engulf and result in death With the final breath taken away from the rib cage Left with nuthin in place, except a taste to engage Cos it’s an unpredictable weapon, its… a thing called rage |
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IP: C1DA C961
..Once again..great piece..great vocab(once again even for you..)..great line to start the rhyme..and great imagery..what more can I say..this is Dope..
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IP: 5AF5 5CA5
thnx.... uppin
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IP: 37A2 2804
Good piece here good vocab. 9.5/10
peace.
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Strong Hold Productions!™ | A.Metz aka Competition | J.Davis aka Da Kid | R.Davis |
More to come soon... The Mixtape also coming soon |
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IP: DF7B C8F7
WOW.... thnx for that breakdown.... i see what you mean, that bit could be improved....LMFAO...
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IP: 5AF5 5CA5
come on ppl...... quit sleeping....
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IP: 4D62 B819
GOod shit............ggreat vocab an rhyming obviously...
shit was sik.. only one of the few open mics ive peeped...an one of the better... sum parts were a bit choppy..sounded lile a bucnh of words rhymein really.nuthin to stand out ..u gotta think of a bit better rhyme scheme n ya shit shud be off the huk.. |
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Banned
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IP: 4D62 B819
damn i just blazed a dub blunt to my dome ..shit was cronik...............
anyone need any? |
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Yes I Know
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IP: 5AF5 5CA5
the first few lines were a multifest with good vocab,,, you slipped off a bit towards the end but even that was dope... if you'd carried on the level of the first few lines this verse might have been legendary... the first FOUR lines were extremely dope.. well done and keep elevating
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IP: EC0B 84C7
hey this was nice to read but im drunk so it didnt make any sense but i enjoyed
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IP: 5AF5 5CA5
well go take your pissed ass away, and come back when ya sober......lol
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