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Decent peice from this newbie.. Peep it!
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When i spit.. your left seeing metaphorical visions//
and if you were in a car you be having a horrid collision// our war is my mission and there's no more intermission// if this rhyme can't kill.. any knife, gun or gat will// in my lines I spill my heart n soul, your starting cold// you brain "leaks out" like half eminems album, its pre-sold// Hold you down on the low cold ground n when no one's around// Slice ya head off, steal ya wallet.. then jet off// Now im only 20 bucks up cuz you was broke as fuck// N by the stroke of luck i choke the clutch// n my car dies out.. what the hell, what do i do?// In the distance is my friend, i run to him swiftly// and quickly explain the situation at hand// i put all my faith in this man, so ask what to do// "theres red blue lights faslhing behind you dude!"// <-- him, my friend I gotta jump, run, take tha fuck off// I can't be found in this hood, i'll be grounded for good// If im found then you should not stay around in this hood// So while they chase me n slowly catch up// i see you run the other direction n snatch up// the guys bodie that i scraped up// steal tha evidence and hide from the residence// Trip to the ground, knees trembel in their pressence// the cops finally caught me, the got me surrounded// lucky you stole the body so they never found it// I got cuffed, striped, locked up n pounded// I just pray you made it away// from the shit i caused that day// This is the 2nd peice i ever wrote.. hope ya like it! Last edited by defcon : 01-18-04 at 11:51 AM. |
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