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01-20-04, 08:51 PM
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Dynasty Soldiers: Bad Situation
IP: F127 8F9A
Dynasty Soldiers Presents: Bad Situation
Damn I better run cuz I just shot someone in da chest Police pulled up, took me and put me in their car b4 i could protest Whent to court,they pressed charges and took arrest I`m gettin mad at myself and gettin stressed Say to God, " Why couldnt I have been blessed?" Then I look back at my Bad Situation Man Im a bad citizen to my whole nation Start yellin and cussin in frustration I never in my life wanted to go to the Police Station Never thought I could survive behind bars All dem high gangstaz on the streets smokin cigars While Im here in this fucked up joint I would never meet my goals and then I disappoint Presented by Dynasty Soldiers If u wanna try out hit this link up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106844 |
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01-20-04, 10:20 PM
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Banned: Racism
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IP: D4CC BCDF
nice elevation, i think your ready, go try your new shit in frontlines!
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01-21-04, 07:31 AM
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IP: F127 8F9A
IIGHT Thanks man...........................
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01-21-04, 07:32 AM
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IP: F127 8F9A
I follow rules, I take orders: That must mean Im a good Soldiers.......LOL
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01-21-04, 08:05 AM
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IP: 4514 2C8C
lol...pretty good...
You had nice flow here, some dope internals which sped it up nicely....you had some good imagry here, told a dope short story..your story-tellin' abilities are improving even though it is a bit of a played out topic...you delievered it nicely.. 3/5 keep spittin' that shit. |
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01-21-04, 08:21 AM
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Banned: Spamming
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IP: 4577 CD9A
..decent..for you..better than your other posts I've read recently..
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